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Parcel for you....Part 6

‘We can’t do it at the table!’
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Parcel for you....Part 5

Over the following few days, Vanessa, very occasionally and cautiously took Spencer out of ‘depressed man’ setting and engaged him in conversation...
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'Parcel for you...' Part 4

Vanessa put down the phone and stood behind Spencer, staring at the top of his head, light brown skin showing through the gaps in his thick dark hair...
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Come to the Sports Hall

Words fired like quills and hair pulled sore at the root. Shins blackened in brute blows. Flesh hung out to dry in frigid shows of shame. Unchosen on...
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'Parcel for you..' Part 3

‘Well, he’s done a good job of the lawn. I think you need to be careful not to confuse him, he's fresh out of the box, Vanessa. Play around with the...
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Stunning. This took me to a

Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2023

Stunning. This took me to a new place. Strong and sinuous, wonderful.

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Posted in Fenrir

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Love, 'the sigh of mountains'

Posted on Wed, 08 Nov 2023

Love, 'the sigh of mountains' and 'Shadows on Aspen bark so distant from steel and glass'. The approach of short, cold days captured so beautifully in your poem.

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Posted in The Changing of Seasons

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What a horrible story and

Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2023

What a horrible story and sadly not an unusual one. The punishments don't tend to fit crimes like this but to match barbarism with barbarism seems like a step backwards. You're right, that poor little boy...

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Posted in Seriously?

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Such wise words and so neatly

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

Such wise words and so neatly and artfully arranged. The age old problem of how to right wrongs without doubling up on the wrong or being trampled all over. We've still some evolving to do.

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Posted in One Good Turn

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'whose bark wrinkled with age

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023

'whose bark wrinkled with age' I love the idea of elements of the forest also growing old like the journey of your parents from their youthful courtship through to 'the suffocated heavy blanket of fear' in old age. The endless cycle of new...

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Posted in Remembering

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This is very powerful, Di.

Posted on Sun, 29 Oct 2023

This is very powerful, Di. The word shame is so exposing, the sound of it making you feel, at once ashamed. 

'It is revenge', an endless cycle of revenge. We learn it as children but as adults, with no greater powers to intervene, does it...

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Posted in October 2023

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It sounds like all your cats

Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023

It sounds like all your cats are living the good life. I love their names. I have a very fussy cat. Magnus, he has put on weight recently and I know my neighbour feeds him, what I don't know, pate maybe.

Tricky having six, especially when...

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Posted in Nanny, Shot Herself In The Foot!

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An interesting look into the

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

An interesting look into the night time world of wakefulness, Jenny, your psyche soaring beneath those closed eyelids. It does seem to provide a unique gap into more mysterious layers of consciousness, somewhere between proper dreams and lucidity...

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Posted in Transcendental Journey of Meditation

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Ha ha, you must have gone to

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023

Ha ha, you must have gone to a mixed mega comprehensive like me then. Those poor teachers, the ones who tried that is. Thank you for reading.

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Posted in Come to the Sports Hall

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Love, 'wordlessly as a storm'

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

Love, 'wordlessly as a storm'. The magic of the lake, communicated softly in your poem. I googled it and now I want to visit.

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Posted in Blagdon Lake in Winter

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