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Brodie's Big Idea

‘I’m really impressed with what you’ve done in the garden, Brodie.’ Brodie flicked his oily hair and blinked, he didn’t like compliments. He already...
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Parcel for you ......Part 9

Vanessa was perched on the edge of her bed, rifling through the bedside drawer, parting a sea of notebooks, pens, nail polishes, bank statements and...
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I went back to Birmingham

A brutalist and brutal poem. It's my hometown so I can.
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In Your House

In your house, it’s always night time You never let the sunshine in Running on an endless loop Stale thoughts on ever deepening tracks Landscapes are...
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Song of Myself

Written in 1892 - Poem by Walt Whitman
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This is easy to read, classy

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

This is easy to read, classy and sort of meditative. It's a perfect short story. Takes me back to very middle-class homes I visited as a child where people were cultured and ate food I'd never heard of and had original artwork on the walls. It...

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Posted in Enoshima (Part One of Two)

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I'm not sure what that lot

Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2024

I'm not sure what that lot are or if they're even just holograms, such if their disconnection from society.

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I really like this, Rhiannon.

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2024

I really like this, Rhiannon. It's easy to forget that farmers are up and out in all weathers, at all times helping nature along. Your words are soft and powerful here, much like the lamplight.

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Posted in Night Help

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I too love, 'birdsong ballads

Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024

I too love, 'birdsong ballads on barest branches'. It's something I've been noticing this week, the birds are celebrating day length. Peace is the greatest thing we can hope for and some sort of rebalancing in our economy. New year's eve truly...

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Posted in January Panorama

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I've been brainwashed, Di. I

Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024

I've been brainwashed, Di. I'm smoking a cigar in some long glistening loafers as we speak, no socks mind, just a hint of tanned ankle.

Thank you for reading and your great compliment x

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That took a dark turn. I

Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024

That took a dark turn. I honestly thought this was a gentle peice about the Northern Lights, The part about the man in white fedora attacking a couple and biting them, it happens (a lot in Wales apparently). Then all sorts of carnage unfolding...

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Posted in Abyss

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A perfect storm in words. I

Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024

A perfect storm in words. I've just moved house and the sounds produced by the high winds are more alarming since I'm yet to figure out what's normal for the building. Awful damage for some out there. Let's hope for more peace and perhaps even...

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Your poem is very cleansing,

Posted on Wed, 13 Dec 2023

Your poem is very cleansing, Rhiannon. You've conveyed a strong sense of all that water rushing, studded with wintry natural features, tangled bare branches and leaf litter.

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I think his idea was already

Posted on Wed, 13 Dec 2023

I think his idea was already out of date when he thought of it. All those ideas, locked away in rooms while the world destroys itself. Thank you for reading and commenting, Jenny.

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Posted in Brodie's Big Idea

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Very creepy throughout. I don

Posted on Tue, 12 Dec 2023

Very creepy throughout. I don't know what happened but I was throughly absorbed and very scared of Mrs Stanton.

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Posted in If We Don't Talk About It, It Won't Haunt Me

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