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Cherry

Eat [2]

It was Sunday when we stepped off the ferry in Tarbert on the Isle of Lewis. That meant, the ferryman said, there was no food to be had. I’d thought...

Eat [I]

Our green blankets, those which kept us snug, are pulled back with a crack, discarded long threads which we had sewn in and around our multiples are...

Taste

Out of my teacup half-way down, I smacked my lips made sure with my tongue as my throat smarted it reminded me of young days when I would blow a...
Cherry

Night

Clothes ruffled, bra breast empty, mound of feet, pressed socks, flat. Tagged layers of scarfs, chainmail belt, empty side of your bed, folded...

Manifest

Inspired by Edwin Morgan
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46 of my comments have received 43 Great Feedback votes

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You took me there 'drifting

Posted on Mon, 21 Sep 2015

You took me there 'drifting peacefully on a lone cloud' circling back round again to the 'what will happen if I leave this world.'  You captured a feeling of pensive sadness, highlighted by the colours and serenity of space. I'm...

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Posted in If I Was To Leave This World

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Nicely done - I like the

Posted on Tue, 25 Aug 2015

Nicely done - I like the structure, rhyming and the use of the U turn in the ending :)

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Posted in The Ultimate Outcome (IP)

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Nice imagery with the trit

Posted on Tue, 25 Aug 2015

Nice imagery with the trit trot and pony tail streaming in the wind. Loved the winged sunshine child. Beautiful heartfelt last stanza...and lovely photo.

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Posted in On my Daughter Learning to Ride

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A most believable voice. Feel

Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

A most believable voice. Feel outraged and angry at the misunderstanding; 'She just never says 'No' or 'Yes'.  You've portrayed this character and highlighted this issue really well. Only thing I'd say is- a smalll suggestion- do you need that...

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Posted in Saturday Night and Sunday Morning

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Really worth sorting out

Posted on Wed, 19 Aug 2015

Really worth sorting out those few typo's as this is really good and heartfelt as Bee says.

'bur' is maybe but? 

Really enjoyed 'word silhouettes/ tree cigarettes'

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Posted in Negative Spaces

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Found this engaging both in

Posted on Sat, 08 Aug 2015

Found this engaging both in the characters inner thoughts and story line. Lovely conversational voice and the last paragraph ties it up nicely.

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Posted in The Path of the Black Cat

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Lovely tribute to sisters - I

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015

Lovely tribute to sisters - I have to agree they help 'see the goodness in me'.

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Posted in Sisters Are Angels

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Takes away the morbidity of

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2015

Takes away the morbidity of cemetry, graves, death. Makes death sound freeing. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

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Posted in Last Request

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Sweet.. bittersweet.. sharp

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2015

Sweet.. bittersweet.. sharp and poignant.

'hair the colour of straw with a wonky smile'

A most lovely and emotive read. Loved the vibrancy of the Mumbai red and gold.

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Posted in Sweet Daughter Mine

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I found the words used at

Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2015

I found the words used at each line break worked effectively- for instance; black, rubbish, throw, in first stanza. Some pungent smells created with the green bin contents, and an emotive last stanza- enjoyed reading this! 

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Posted in Garbage

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