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395 of my comments have received 392 Great Feedback votes

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The narrator seems to be as

Posted on Mon, 20 Oct 2014

The narrator seems to be as much a ghost as the characters she happens upon,  Floating through shared memories.  This sensation also mirrors the sense of diembodiment felt when in shock,which works so well with the final image.

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Posted in All the Ghosts of Us

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There is something s gentle

Posted on Fri, 10 Oct 2014

There is something so gentle in this.  I like that it is in first person, the act of falling is so compelling, the irony of the helpful woman.

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Posted in Living on the Edge

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Each episode is clearly drawn

Posted on Wed, 08 Oct 2014

Each episode is clearly drawn.  Great stucture, leaving us with a little stab in the heart.

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Posted in An apology to Archie

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Absolutley wonderful!  A

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014

Absolutley wonderful!  A brilliantl character, funny and touching.  

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Posted in The Diary of an Aspiring Hitman - Chapter 1

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Another wonderfully evocative

Posted on Wed, 01 Oct 2014

Another wonderfully evocative poem.  This has such a stong sense of place and timelessness. A renaissance back to nature. Beautiful.

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Posted in Aridity's Garden

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Funny and heartbreaking at

Posted on Sun, 28 Sep 2014

Funny and heartbreaking at the same time. Love it.

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Posted in Passing Through

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What a wonderful story.

Posted on Sat, 27 Sep 2014

What a wonderful story.  Weighty with legend and place.  It is written like a story to be read aloud.

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Posted in THE ISLAND

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Very dark, very readable, the

Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014

Very dark, very readable, the odd technical error jars.

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Posted in Do what thou wilt

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From the dreamy days of

Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2014

From the dreamy days of summer to dreamy snippets from lessons, lovely.

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Posted in The ABC of Zoe

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i'm enjoying this and agree

Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2014

i'm enjoying this and agree with vera's comments, now we're this far on it would be good to feel a bit closer to your characters.

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Posted in Progeniture, Ch. 4

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