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Natural History
In the history of school, Class 5 was the happiest. Outside swan plants grew - we gave them sidelong glances, hope was brewing. A race through times...
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Waiting for Treacle Tart
Matron secured herself into her apron. She took the hand-made card her children had presented her with that morning from her bag and slipped it into...
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Dirty Lucre
Troubles are scratching at your door again. We eat fruit and drink coffee in the sun, bright smiles collide and clink, eyes meet and blink, I know...
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The Bus as a Microcosm
En masse, bus passengers are mundane. They lack the individuality possessed by drivers of the sleek cars that passengers look down at as they chug...
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Gauguin Girl
He saw my hibiscus face in sunlight, strong feet in warm dust, eyes that soaked up the world, thighs grasping heat from a horse’s flank. We listened...
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Wonderful, I can see how this
Posted on Thu, 22 Jan 2015
Wonderful, I can see how this moment would stay with you.
Read full commentPosted in The lake and the seagull
Tom is a great character, you
Posted on Wed, 21 Jan 2015
Tom is a great character, you played with the reader's feeling thoughout, really enjoyed reading this.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Hitchhikers
The curse of being human.
Posted on Sun, 18 Jan 2015
The curse of being human.
Read full commentPosted in three a.m.
I really like the way you
Posted on Thu, 15 Jan 2015
I really like the way you have built this, excellent structure.
Read full commentPosted in Melancholy
The archeology of ourselves,
Posted on Tue, 06 Jan 2015
The archeology of ourselves, I like the ideas and images in this poem.
Read full commentPosted in Sifting Through
Love this cat's eye view of
Posted on Mon, 05 Jan 2015
Love this cat's eye view of the world, hope he keeps up with his journal.
Read full commentPosted in Omar's Diary 4th January 2015
Good on the details (cake and
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2015
Good on the details (cake and coffee), more character background would be good so we care about the character.
Read full commentPosted in Pure Magic Chapter 2
A nive fairytale feel. I
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2015
A nive fairytale feel. I like the descriptions of the house and would like some more of this.
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So sad, I read the other poem
Posted on Fri, 02 Jan 2015
So sad, I read the other poem first but now see that that tells of the haunting presence of a missing colleague.
Read full commentPosted in Rock Bottom
I like the sense of certainty
Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015
I like the sense of certainty, the mix of natural laws and human behaviour.
Read full commentPosted in Cosmological Constant
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