I have 74 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
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My ghost story 'The Light Left' (under the name Jane Ayrie) can be found in the anthology 'Cold Iron', published by Iron Press:: https://tinyurl.com/yardmpqs
A short piece of science fiction, 'Madness Not To' (under the name Jane Roberts) is on the Terra 2 website here: :https://yorkstjohnterratwo.com/portfolio/madness-not-to-by-jane-roberts/
My ABC blog, including life at Castle Pillock, is here: https://www.abctales.com/blogs/airyfairy There are also some previous Castle Pillock episodes in the named collection below.
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216 of my comments have received 219 Great Feedback votes
Really liked this, Rhiannon.
Posted on Mon, 18 Sep 2017
Really liked this, Rhiannon. The rhyming works really well, and parts of it reminded me of riddle poems, which fits in with the idea of the wise owl. It's a wonderful idea, that we could have a wise and perceptive companion who could keep an...Read full comment
Posted in Watch your back!
It's interesting how poems
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
It's interesting how poems take different people different ways. I thought it was very clear, but in a very subtle way. I think you have to stay true to your vision, especially as it has struck a chord with a number of readers. That's the...Read full comment
Posted in time travelling
I like the way this shows
Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2017
I like the way this shows that depression invades all the senses. The description of the grin 'held up with string' is particularly striking and really conveys the mask that people use to disguise the reality. And of course, as you indicate,...Read full comment
Posted in The Dark
Good to see another chapter
Posted on Tue, 29 Aug 2017
Good to see another chapter of this! The plot is coming along nicely. The only reservation I have is that occasionally bits of the modern dialogue seem overwritten eg 'I think he protested that title a little too loudly' - not sure you need '...Read full comment
Posted in "Past or Present" Chapter 8
I'm hoping this is part of
Posted on Tue, 22 Aug 2017
I'm hoping this is part of something longer, because I found it very frustrating that it ends there! Characters are nicely set up and we really want to know how this situation is going to pan out.Read full comment
Posted in Driving to Nowhere
So much to absorb and think
Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017
So much to absorb and think about in this, Elsie. I've read it several times, and it poses a lot of questions. I do hope your dad's funeral was what you wanted it to be. The bit about more contact with the family made me smile - all sorts of...Read full comment
Lovely stuff. The bit where
Posted on Fri, 18 Aug 2017
Lovely stuff. The bit where they come in and you want to hear all about it and they just say 'OK' because they're starving - that really made me smile. Always in their own time. The reassurance of everything being as it should be, after a day...Read full comment
Posted in first day in senior school