derekpayton512
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Derek Payton
I am a young writer looking for constructive criticism! Please comment and let me know what you think, I'm really here for opinions and advice. If you are experienced with grammar and sentence structure, and would like to give some advice in those fields, please comment! If you see recurring errors in any of my pieces, please feel free to comment! :D
I feel ya on this one man. I
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
I feel ya on this one man. I've never been in .... quite that situation. As in she wasn't my fiancee, nor was my "buddy" brutally murdered by Chuck E. Cheese. I've been down the same road emotionally however, and I implore you to keep an eye on...
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Still impressed.
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2015
I've been reading through alot of your writing, and I have to say I'm still quite impressed. I think I have found a standard to strive for. If you have some time at any point, I would like to ask for your opinions on some of my poetry.
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