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This is my response to a writing prompt "Time travel, a bookmark, the angel Gabriel." It was supposed to be flash fiction, but you can't have everything.
68 of my comments have received 71 Great Feedback votes
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This reads so brilliantly
Posted on Fri, 24 Dec 2021
I enjoyed it so much. This line especially made me laugh "Boris had always fancied himself as a bit like Tom Cruise. It was a comparison nobody else saw." I've got to go back and read the other pieces!
I am a ketchup fiend ... I get a big trough of it and dip my hamburger in it sometimes. They never give me enough for the fries either. I'd been curious what Salad Cream is. It's mentioned in Fawlty Towers but not something I find in the States. ...
The visual images this puts in my head are stunning. Your picture is also inspiring to me. Beautiful open. I also agree with Di above, why not give fantasy prose a whirl?
This reads so brilliantly
Posted on Fri, 24 Dec 2021
I enjoyed it so much. This line especially made me laugh "Boris had always fancied himself as a bit like Tom Cruise. It was a comparison nobody else saw." I've got to go back and read the other pieces!
Read full commentPosted in A Christmas Boris
Wonderful Tale
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
It makes sense that the clock repairer's ticker needed repair before your clock could. :)
Read full commentPosted in Time (Clock of The Heart)
Thank you so much! This
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
Thank you so much! This feedback means the world to me... it makes me want to keep writing!
Read full commentPosted in The Otherworldly Visitor of Oscaloo
Spectacular
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
Such a wonderful and inspired take on this fairy tale that I absolutely loved reading.
Read full commentPosted in A Company of Wolves
Such excellent images this
Posted on Thu, 16 Dec 2021
Such excellent images this one puts in my mind. Great work as always :D
Read full commentPosted in Christmas With Monsieur Bublé
I am a ketchup fiend ... I
Posted on Tue, 14 Dec 2021
I am a ketchup fiend ... I get a big trough of it and dip my hamburger in it sometimes. They never give me enough for the fries either. I'd been curious what Salad Cream is. It's mentioned in Fawlty Towers but not something I find in the States. ...
Read full commentPosted in The Mystery Of The Heinz Salad Cream With 30% Less Fat.
I love watching robins
Posted on Mon, 13 Dec 2021
I love watching robins hopping around listening for worms. Also I love your poem!
Read full commentPosted in Robin At Winter Solstice
An old smoke alarm is our
Posted on Mon, 13 Dec 2021
An old smoke alarm is our working theory but I have yet to locate it!
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not A Princess.
There's a mysterious beep in
Posted on Mon, 13 Dec 2021
There's a mysterious beep in my garage that's been going on for years. I still have no idea what is causing it.
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not A Princess.
The visuals
Posted on Sun, 12 Dec 2021
The visual images this puts in my head are stunning. Your picture is also inspiring to me. Beautiful open. I also agree with Di above, why not give fantasy prose a whirl?
Read full commentPosted in It Being December
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