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I have 1724 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1435991 times and 1035 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Ewan Lawrie

The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
Both Moffat novels are available here

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9 Wanderers

Planet comes from πλανήτης meaning 'wanderer' Image by Sage Ross CC-SA 3.0
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Jabber Wiki

Going for my jab today. Image created at Photofunia.com
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Nocturne

Nocturne - a night scene. Image taken by Chris Gampat used under Licence CC by SA 2.0 Source Flicker
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The Green Man

If I explain it... well let's just say poems are like jokes, explain them and they don't work. CCA-SA 3.0 Licence Source Wikipedia SiGarb ( talk | contribs )
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Impressing Miss Axelrod

Ahh...nostalgia. It's always the music, isn't it? Image author's own, as for its subject, Go Ask Alice...
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157 of my comments have received 166 Great Feedback votes

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I know,

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2018

that people don't, that's why I use them! (And the summaries on the front page) laugh...

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Posted in Kim's Game at Some Remove

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Good

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

 

to see some more of this.
There are a couple of things, I've noticed.

Do you need "uncharted" - as in unknown because it is not on the map - rather than unchartered (like an accountant, in the olden days)?

"...

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Posted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)

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I know,

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018

it's hard to judge what to use, isn't it? I think it's the Puritan roots of the Mayflower arrivals......

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Posted in Pins (1)

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This interesting piece,

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2018

for trying something different, for looking different, for being different, is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Why not share or retweet it if you like it too.

Image source is...

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Posted in DREAMING

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Clearly

Posted on Thu, 04 Jan 2018

You have done some research. However, the RPI changed its name in 1883, or rather reopened under another name that year. 

"In September 1881, the Royal Polytechnic Institution closed, marking a transition to new ownership and a new era...

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Posted in The Second World War: PART 1 - Roger Farrier - Dunkirk (1940) #2

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Woof! Woof!

Posted on Tue, 26 Dec 2017

Gold digger alert! We men are such fools, I imagine Donald believes Melania finds him irresistible, (just like Ivana and Marla did too).

Interesting piece.

best

Ewan

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Posted in Narcissistic

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This

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

is definitely the area to mine for your writing. Convincing; it certainly had me in the classroom (probably in a disappearing seat).
Upbeat and uplifting and at this time of year, why not?

Best

Ewan

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Posted in Ralph and Big Dave

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Thank

Posted on Thu, 23 Nov 2017

you for the roses.
This is artfully done. For me it would be even better if you didn't give the answer to the riddle in the poem itself.
Lovely imagery and phrase-making.

Best

Ewan

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Posted in My Lady Of Damask

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Really liked this.

Posted on Wed, 08 Nov 2017

However, it needs a good "going at" for punctuation. Or you could not punctuate at all and leave everything in lower case, which might well suit the content. The problem is that some punctuation is worse (in terms of meaning) than none. One thing...

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Posted in City Breath

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I see

Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017

what Jack means.

"beyond make-do-and-mend"

or even

"beyond make-do-and-mending"

I like this.

Best

Ewan

 

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Posted in Broken

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