Chapter One of a story i've been working on! Please give feedback on anything as i am constantly trying to improve! Enjoy! - Hal (Harry)
This is the start of one of the final chapters for my book which includes a great battle. I would love to see what everyone thinks and get some feedback as i feel this is one of my best pieces so far. I aim to upload the next part for some point next week and continue doing that until i finish the chapter! Hope you all enjoy! :)
Little love poem thing i tried for aomeone special... Would love feedback! Enjoy, Harry!