monodemo
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I have 449 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 409066 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
The contest of life
The demand for a place in Scoil Realt na Mara, the school I once went to, has grown exponentially. Since the completion of the new housing estate...
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- 416 reads
Thunder in paradise (part 5)
Carol carried the wood over to the beat-up boat, but where’s Pablo? She calls his name and see’s him emerge from the other side of the boathouse. ‘...
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- 1044 reads
Thunder in paradise (part 4)
Carol woke from a restless sleep and looked at the mesmerising view from the bed. The sun was rising, its rays dancing on the ripples of the clear...
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- 422 reads
The Click
There she sits. She sits and she waits for her time to come. Every Wednesday she waits for the people on high to descend upon her to tell her if they...
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- 980 reads
Thunder in paradise (part 3)
As each of them looked at each other they knew that one of two things; either Lucas was behind both murders or there was a killer amongst them. No...
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