monodemo
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I have 425 stories published in
16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 157593 times
and 111 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Thunder in paradise (part 3)
As each of them looked at each other they knew that one of two things; either Lucas was behind both murders or there was a killer amongst them. No...
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Thunder in paradise (part 2)
As Mike wandered the beach going into every hut, he knew to be occupied he realised that each and every one of his ‘guests’ were awake watching the...
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Thunder in paradise (part 1)
Mike Reid, of Reid and associates, was quite aware that his employees were doing their darndest to help make his law company the best in town. He had...
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Reminiscence
Pip was guilt ridden. She couldn’t meet the eyes of her mother, Kathy, or aunt, Lorraine, after Sinead’s death. Pip couldn’t forgive herself for...
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So, so still
She was so still. Leo looked at his baby girl over her cot and couldn’t believe he had finally gotten her to sleep. He looked at his little miracle...
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