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We made friends very easily When we were only four For months the house stood empty Then your family moved next door We bathed our dolls in saucepans...
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All of this is good. My
Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2013
All of this is good. My favourite bit is para 4 about the English Grey World and' then you spend your weekends trying to scribble colour and chaos over the lines'. Did someone say this to you? It's very well observed Elsie
This is interesting. The bleak seascape and the angry downpour, does that reflect the mental states of the people? Are Ki and the old man sort of spiritual twins? I like the mention of the drug paraphenalia it adds today to yesterday. And the...
A heartfelt poem. It is horrible when family members die when you are of the same generation and it does not seem to make any sense. I am glad that Rhiannon is praying for you Elsie
All of this is good. My
Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2013
All of this is good. My favourite bit is para 4 about the English Grey World and' then you spend your weekends trying to scribble colour and chaos over the lines'. Did someone say this to you? It's very well observed Elsie
Read full commentPosted in Your Red Buses
This is interesting. The
Posted on Tue, 22 Oct 2013
This is interesting. The bleak seascape and the angry downpour, does that reflect the mental states of the people? Are Ki and the old man sort of spiritual twins? I like the mention of the drug paraphenalia it adds today to yesterday. And the...
Read full commentPosted in Black Sea
A heartfelt poem. It is
Posted on Mon, 21 Oct 2013
A heartfelt poem. It is horrible when family members die when you are of the same generation and it does not seem to make any sense. I am glad that Rhiannon is praying for you Elsie
Read full commentPosted in Of God and Mercy
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