Silver Spun Sand
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Hello there, Rhiannon. I was
Posted on Sun, 13 Sep 2015
Hello there, Rhiannon. I was truly looking forward to reading your weekly contribution to us, and I most certainly was not disappointed.
An inspiring, and thought-provoking hymn, especially, for me at least, the penultimate stanza. An...Read full comment
Posted in Deep Love
Gosh, Rhiannon, I have to say
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
Gosh, Rhiannon, I have to say that this particular one in your series, is up there with my favourites. It has an effective driving beat, as of the tempo of a train, which really helps to hammer its more than salient points, home.
Much...Read full comment
Posted in Journey
Hi there, EB, this reminded
Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015
Hi there, EB, this reminded me of a 1960's film called, 'The Collector' starring Terence Stamp...all about a lonely man who collected butterflies. Sounds idyllic, but it wasn't; indeed being a gripping pyschological thriller. Things are seldom...Read full comment
Posted in The Memory Collector
Effective use of alliteration
Posted on Wed, 05 Aug 2015
Effective use of alliteration in the first line of the first stanza which serves to 'slam' the poem home from the start, and then with a marked contrast of much softer language and imagery in the second line. A poem of contrasts, which is...Read full comment
Posted in Surroundings impress (Poetry Monthly)
Effective alliteration, here, Bee...
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2015
Effective alliteration here, Bee, and the whole poem's layout adds to its effectiveness and the welling up ofemotions; so very like the sea, indeed - holding back, for all its worth, until it is...Read full comment
Posted in Beach