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When a mother's voice captures time special as an angel's kiss, gentle flutter of wings, quivering leaves in captured breeze, my innocence yearns to...
I plucked a moment from younger days, pleasures twirling in an unseen eddy; arms outstretched before sloping to earth, laughing among blades of vivid...
I don't normally read this kind of information. But you make so many valid points that I just had to comment. It sounds like Ted Kaczynski had some notions of where technology is taking us that compare to my feelings.
Your story is so irresistible with its compelling magic. I'm wondering how Daphne will feel once the honesty tea wears off, I expect she'll be regretting telling them about Avery...but that's what makes the story so interesting and intriguing....
Phew! What a tense episode. I agree with Di, the drama and tension are first class. Now we have another cliffhanger to look forward to finding out. You have the urgency of the situation spot on.
poor Vanessa started out by wanting a companion, now she's afraid he's finding new friends. It's a shame she's not more focussed on discovering her own hobbies, so she has an outlet for her emotions.
Wonderful poem PauI. I could really emerse my inner child's imagination as I read. But then I just love fantasy and you've really captured the essence perfectly.
Hello Di, there's tranquility about walking the Ridgeway, it's so open and peaceful. I do love the copse of trees, because it's magical standing in amongst them. There's an amazing view the other side of the trees too, where you can see for miles...
This poem reminds me of those days from the past when I used to work on the garden and get ready to collect the harvest of all the produce I'd grown from seed in the spring. I remember one year I grew corn, runner beans, tomatoes, lettuce,...
Poor Vanessa, that Steve was so cocky and made her feel uncomfortable, even Annie wasn't sure about him, no wonder Vanessa was glad to go home. I wonder if they'll meet up again! Spencer seemed keen. Look forward to finding out.
Your poem had my mouth
Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024
Your poem had my mouth watering Rhiannon. So yummy for this time of the year.
Love the photos too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Delicious harvest
I don't normally read this
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
I don't normally read this kind of information. But you make so many valid points that I just had to comment. It sounds like Ted Kaczynski had some notions of where technology is taking us that compare to my feelings.
Like you said there...
Read full commentPosted in Where Are We Now? Ted Kaczynski and Technological Society
Your story is so irresistible
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
Your story is so irresistible with its compelling magic. I'm wondering how Daphne will feel once the honesty tea wears off, I expect she'll be regretting telling them about Avery...but that's what makes the story so interesting and intriguing....
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 17
Phew! What a tense episode. I
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
Phew! What a tense episode. I agree with Di, the drama and tension are first class. Now we have another cliffhanger to look forward to finding out. You have the urgency of the situation spot on.
It's great to see the gold cherries on this...
Read full commentPosted in Drowning Not Waving (Dead Reckoning series - Part 26)
Hi Jane,
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
Hi Jane,
poor Vanessa started out by wanting a companion, now she's afraid he's finding new friends. It's a shame she's not more focussed on discovering her own hobbies, so she has an outlet for her emotions.
I like the idea of...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34
Wonderful poem PauI. I could
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
Wonderful poem PauI. I could really emerse my inner child's imagination as I read. But then I just love fantasy and you've really captured the essence perfectly.
Very much enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bedtime Stories
Hello Di, there's tranquility
Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024
Hello Di, there's tranquility about walking the Ridgeway, it's so open and peaceful. I do love the copse of trees, because it's magical standing in amongst them. There's an amazing view the other side of the trees too, where you can see for miles...
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Ridgeway
I agree with insert Phil and
Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2024
I agree with insert Phil and couldn't have put it any better myself.
Loving all the detail that gives such a clear description of what's going on.
Look forward to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bridge Over Troubled Water (Dead Reckoning series - Part 25)
This poem reminds me of those
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
This poem reminds me of those days from the past when I used to work on the garden and get ready to collect the harvest of all the produce I'd grown from seed in the spring. I remember one year I grew corn, runner beans, tomatoes, lettuce,...
Read full commentPosted in The earth moves on …
Poor Vanessa, that Steve was
Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2024
Poor Vanessa, that Steve was so cocky and made her feel uncomfortable, even Annie wasn't sure about him, no wonder Vanessa was glad to go home. I wonder if they'll meet up again! Spencer seemed keen. Look forward to finding out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You..Part 33
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