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In distant past when spring slept through winter's chill, silent smoke emerged from chimneys spilling fumes into atmosphere, like serpents determined...
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You bring Kathleen to life
Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2024
You bring Kathleen to life with your accomplished description of her and skilful rhythm and rhyme. I did feel sorry for her with receding hair, that's the one thing I dread as I get older...including going bald. ...
It sounds like nature is getting its own back Jane. I loved reading this story. I've started writing a piece on saving the countryside from development myself, I hope you don't mind.
Thanks for bringing this important subject up in a story...
A flinching account of the law. Poor Josiah and Archibald being treated as persons of interest,and after what they've been through, while the real culprits are still out there.
The plot is thickening and draws me in as a reader.
It's true what marandina said. Your word are something we all come to ponder on at some point in life. I know I've felt many times so sad and weary missing a loved one that's now gone, but all we can do is to hold on to their memory and make the...
This is such a charming poem Rhiannon. I could just imagine Paddington bear meeting Winnie- the- Pooh at Paddington station and having this conversation.
Very well written and a tribute to those two lovable characters.
You bring Kathleen to life
Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2024
You bring Kathleen to life with your accomplished description of her and skilful rhythm and rhyme. I did feel sorry for her with receding hair, that's the one thing I dread as I get older...including going bald. ...
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It sounds like nature is
Posted on Sun, 01 Dec 2024
It sounds like nature is getting its own back Jane. I loved reading this story. I've started writing a piece on saving the countryside from development myself, I hope you don't mind.
Thanks for bringing this important subject up in a story...
Read full commentPosted in The Road To Ponkerton Village - Part 1
A flinching account of the
Posted on Fri, 29 Nov 2024
A flinching account of the law. Poor Josiah and Archibald being treated as persons of interest,and after what they've been through, while the real culprits are still out there.
The plot is thickening and draws me in as a reader.
...
Read full commentPosted in I Fought the Law (Dead Reckoning series - Part 37)
Now there's a turn up for the
Posted on Fri, 22 Nov 2024
Now there's a turn up for the books. Things are becoming more ominous and intriguing with each part.
Looking forward to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Drive (Dead Reckoning series - Part 36)
It's true what marandina said
Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024
It's true what marandina said. Your word are something we all come to ponder on at some point in life. I know I've felt many times so sad and weary missing a loved one that's now gone, but all we can do is to hold on to their memory and make the...
Read full commentPosted in Endings
This is such a charming poem
Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024
This is such a charming poem Rhiannon. I could just imagine Paddington bear meeting Winnie- the- Pooh at Paddington station and having this conversation.
Very well written and a tribute to those two lovable characters.
I actually...
Read full commentPosted in The Bears Discuss
You pulled me in as a reader
Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024
You pulled me in as a reader from the start. A gripping read as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Night Chapter 5
Poor Vanessa just wants to
Posted on Fri, 15 Nov 2024
Poor Vanessa just wants to spend time with Spencer before returning to work, nothing seems to work out the way she plans.
As irresistible to read as always Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You..Part 41
Oh! No! Not again. I have a
Posted on Fri, 15 Nov 2024
Oh! No! Not again. I have a bad feeling about this situation too Phil. I agree with insert, what a cliffhanger of an ending.
Always an enjoyable read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Reunited (Dead Reckoning series - Part 35)
You brightened up my day with
Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2024
You brightened up my day with this poem Rhiannon. Such beautiful colours and words, an offering of hope to my favourite time of year.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bright end of autumn
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