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1562 of my comments have received 1583 Great Feedback votes

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Love the notion of a truth

Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

Love the notion of a truth serum. It's certainly caused havoc with this episode! Looking forward to reading more...

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A thought-provoking poem.

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

A thought-provoking poem. Nicely done, of course, Rhiannon. Paul :) 

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Let's hope "Plutinpot the

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Let's hope "Plutinpot the Great" gets stopped in his tracks before his grand tour starts. I suspect history will know him by a different name after he's gone.. 

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Posted in Curiosity Killed The Cat : A Day In The Life Of Alfred Muggins In Turkey (He Daydreams of the Rise and Fall of Empires)

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Your poem tells an

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

Your poem tells an interesting story, Jenny. I like the format and it's full of your excellent use of phrasing etc. There are many better placed than me to give constructive critism but I certainly enjoyed your poem. Paul :)

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Echoing the comments above.

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Echoing the comments above. You have a decent story arc and the characters are all engaging and credible. The dialogue is great. You have something bigger than the sum of its parts. Keep 'em coming, CM. 

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Yes, I read one of the

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Yes, I read one of the Sizewell reactors was due to be decommissioned in July but the government are looking to extend its life. The whole "energy security" issue is a bit of a mess and will be difficult for quite a while. Food for thought....

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Thinking of you, Jean. Sounds

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

Thinking of you, Jean. Sounds like you have committed to the course of treatment so hopefully it will all pay off. Look after yourself. Paul x

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Sounds like the Muggins

Posted on Sat, 28 May 2022

Sounds like the Muggins family had a good time despite the hiccups. I would love to go to Turkey one day! 

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Holiday In Marmaris 2022 : Part 3 : Flight To Exotic Turkey (Escape From Mad Britain!)

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"Folks flock to factory and

Posted on Wed, 25 May 2022

"Folks flock to factory and mill.." "Some nice alliteration and a good rhythm to this one, Rhiannon. Enjoyed. Paul :) 

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Ruminations about Putinpot in

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

Ruminations about Putinpot in Turkey. Don't let a despot ruin your holiday. Interesting thoughts about democracy and communism. 

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Holiday In Marmaris 2022 : Part 1 : Holiday Delays and Invasions

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