Mr Martin gave Sean a little nudge on the back of his shoulder. ‘Go on then,’ he said. Mum stepped out to meet him. ‘So this is yer little friends,’...
We went to see The Poseidon Adventure at the local Odeon. The Spider paid me in and put an arm around my shoulder. We sat in the back seats. His feet...
Miss Dill and Mr Martin weren’t speaking to each other. It had continued over three or four days. They sent out for takeaways and binned the cups and...
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I'm not sure my opinon isn't
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
I'm not sure my opinon isn't as greatly valued as you suggest. Anything by Will Shakespeare, for example, A Midsummer's Night Dream is so boring I'd rather Wait for Godot. I did write a play once. But it was so boring I didn't bother reading it...
I stuck this transition into the story Makis: 'When they’d first met, around a year ago, had changed his life. But he didn’t know if that was a good thing.'
I hope that makes things clearer. It does for me. Thanks again.
Lovely story Penny. I leave all kinds of thngs in my pocket. One time I left the Noble Peace Prize in the backpocket of my denims. It was ruined. I gave up on the Peace idea afterwards.
I'm not sure my opinon isn't
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
I'm not sure my opinon isn't as greatly valued as you suggest. Anything by Will Shakespeare, for example, A Midsummer's Night Dream is so boring I'd rather Wait for Godot. I did write a play once. But it was so boring I didn't bother reading it...
Read full commentPosted in Sawdust
He's haunting the box. Great
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
He's haunting the box. Great story.
Read full commentPosted in IV. Remains - Part Three
well done Luigi. The
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
well done Luigi. The counterfeit notes and counterfeit murder were nice touches. Like you, I wonder who will pick up the storyline?
Read full commentPosted in Penny's Pass the Parcel Part 3
Not sure I'd bother with this
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2026
Not sure I'd bother with this one.
Read full commentPosted in Sawdust
I stuck this transition into
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
I stuck this transition into the story Makis: 'When they’d first met, around a year ago, had changed his life. But he didn’t know if that was a good thing.'
I hope that makes things clearer. It does for me. Thanks again.
Read full commentPosted in 'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2
Lovely story Penny. I leave
Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2026
Lovely story Penny. I leave all kinds of thngs in my pocket. One time I left the Noble Peace Prize in the backpocket of my denims. It was ruined. I gave up on the Peace idea afterwards.
Read full commentPosted in (Teeth Tales) Smiling Underpants
our imagination (well mine)
Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2026
our imagination (well mine) fills in the gaps here.
Read full commentPosted in Transcript
cheers Penny. Like you, I
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
cheers Penny. Like you, I hope someone can take up the challenge. No idea where it will go. But it is open-ended, which should make it easier.
Read full commentPosted in 'Penny’s Pass the Parcel’ Part 2
this makes all the wrong kind
Posted on Tue, 17 Mar 2026
this makes all the wrong kind of sense for the right reasons. Brilliant writing.
Read full commentPosted in IV. Remains - Part Two
strange in a true way.
Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2026
strange in a true way.
Read full commentPosted in IV. Remains - Part One
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