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I can really understand why
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
I can really understand why you needed to write this poem. The shock of knowing this builder took his own life is devastating news whether you knew who he was or not, and it leaves its scar.
Good morning Di, your poem describes well the many memories within our homes and upon the land they're built on. If walls and land could talk, I bet they'd have plenty to say.
I could identify with the stanza about a shelf being taken...
you know I've never seen a gun in real life, leave alone hold one and hope I never do. Even when I was in Florida the police kept them well hidden in the tourist area. It was the one thing that frightened me about holidaying...
I can really understand why
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
I can really understand why you needed to write this poem. The shock of knowing this builder took his own life is devastating news whether you knew who he was or not, and it leaves its scar.
But hopefully time heals.
A heartfelt...
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Good morning Di, your poem
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
Good morning Di, your poem describes well the many memories within our homes and upon the land they're built on. If walls and land could talk, I bet they'd have plenty to say.
I could identify with the stanza about a shelf being taken...
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I'm so glad I found this
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
I'm so glad I found this piece of writing, it made me laugh outloud,
especially...
Read full commentPosted in Larry and Mick and the Coleslaw Catastrophe pt1
This was totally bonkers to
Posted on Thu, 11 Apr 2019
This was totally bonkers to read, but put a big smile on my face.
Thank...
Read full commentPosted in Coleslaw Catastrophe pt7: ‘The Pub'
Great story, I love anything
Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019
Great story, I love anything that gets the imagination going, which is what your story did for me.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The First Night of Spring
Some wonderful expressive
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
Some wonderful expressive pleasing narratives Di. Had natures bohemian feel to it as I read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in First Walk Of April
Such an imaginative piece
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
Such an imaginative piece Richard, felt very spiritual.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Joy! Joy! Joy!
Hi Luigi,
Posted on Mon, 01 Apr 2019
Hi Luigi,
you know I've never seen a gun in real life, leave alone hold one and hope I never do. Even when I was in Florida the police kept them well hidden in the tourist area. It was the one thing that frightened me about holidaying...
Read full commentPosted in Blue Nun and Babycham (Recycled)
Where would we be if we
Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2019
Where would we be if we couldn't see the beauty around us?
Wise words indeed.
Jenny.
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019
Hi Penny,
I like the way your poem reads, that we should take each day and treasure what we have, learn to love ourselves and others. Such inspiring words.
Jenny.
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