The trouble with Troy is that he knows Sheldon is too scared of him. It's hard to keep away from bullies when they're so close. I hope Sheldon starts to realize that friends just don't scare each other.
I think you can put on three pieces in 24 hours, and there's quite a long word count to each piece. But the problem with that is, that I don't know if I could keep up with reading, but then again abc tales isn't going anywhere...
Loving your story and there are some great bits that made me laugh, like the part where you describe the passengers running down the platform for the ferry.
Wow! What an amazing comment. I would have loved to see illustrations to this poem. Just the thought of those rich colours in a little book would be magical.
What a wonderful ending to
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
What a wonderful ending to this chapter. His dad seems like a great father.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 7
The trouble with Troy is that
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
The trouble with Troy is that he knows Sheldon is too scared of him. It's hard to keep away from bullies when they're so close. I hope Sheldon starts to realize that friends just don't scare each other.
Onto next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 6
I don't know why, but part of
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
I don't know why, but part of me feels sorry for Troy, he seems to be a troubled boy that's in need of help.
Still continuing to enjoy.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Balance of Chapter 5
Ah! First love never fails.
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
Ah! First love never fails.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Balance of Chapter 4
Hi Richard,
Posted on Thu, 25 Jul 2019
Hi Richard,
I think you can put on three pieces in 24 hours, and there's quite a long word count to each piece. But the problem with that is, that I don't know if I could keep up with reading, but then again abc tales isn't going anywhere...
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Balance of Chapter 3
Congrats from me on finishing
Posted on Tue, 09 Jul 2019
Congrats from me on finishing this story. It had me gripped from beginning to end, just couldn't put it down.
Also congrats on the pick of the day. Very well deserved.
Good luck for the future.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Julia chapter 29 contd / 30/31 the end
Loving your story and there
Posted on Sun, 30 Jun 2019
Loving your story and there are some great bits that made me laugh, like the part where you describe the passengers running down the platform for the ferry.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in julia 2
I like the message of
Posted on Mon, 01 Jul 2019
I like the message of forgiveness this beautiful butterfly brought to the little girl.
Nice one Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Little Girl
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 23 Jun 2019
Hello Di,
Wow! What an amazing comment. I would have loved to see illustrations to this poem. Just the thought of those rich colours in a little book would be magical.
Thank you so much for reading and the kind words.
Hope...
Read full commentPosted in The Butterfly-Maiden - Rewrite
Such an innocent tiny
Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2019
Such an innocent tiny catterpillar turning in to a beautiful butterfly brings so much wonder to this world, it really does make you think!
Nice one Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Mystery in the Chrysalis
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