Loving your story and there are some great bits that made me laugh, like the part where you describe the passengers running down the platform for the ferry.
Wow! What an amazing comment. I would have loved to see illustrations to this poem. Just the thought of those rich colours in a little book would be magical.
isn't creation an amazing mystery, leaves you with so much wonder. I enjoyed your poem so much because it makes you realize how special and fragile we all actually are.
Congrats from me on finishing
Posted on Tue, 09 Jul 2019
Congrats from me on finishing this story. It had me gripped from beginning to end, just couldn't put it down.
Also congrats on the pick of the day. Very well deserved.
Good luck for the future.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Julia chapter 29 contd / 30/31 the end
Loving your story and there
Posted on Sun, 30 Jun 2019
Loving your story and there are some great bits that made me laugh, like the part where you describe the passengers running down the platform for the ferry.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in julia 2
I like the message of
Posted on Mon, 01 Jul 2019
I like the message of forgiveness this beautiful butterfly brought to the little girl.
Nice one Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Little Girl
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 23 Jun 2019
Hello Di,
Wow! What an amazing comment. I would have loved to see illustrations to this poem. Just the thought of those rich colours in a little book would be magical.
Thank you so much for reading and the kind words.
Hope...
Read full commentPosted in The Butterfly-Maiden - Rewrite
Such an innocent tiny
Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2019
Such an innocent tiny catterpillar turning in to a beautiful butterfly brings so much wonder to this world, it really does make you think!
Nice one Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Mystery in the Chrysalis
I bet Beth will go with him
Posted on Fri, 21 Jun 2019
I bet Beth will go with him again.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "A Timely Adventure" CHAPTER 1
Jaspernon has pushed Patience
Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2019
Jaspernon has pushed Patience too far, I wonder! If she'll forgive him.
Loving this story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Jaspernon The Prince : The Rise of the Cult of the Goddess: Ch.2: Part 1 (Section 1)
Hi Richard,
Posted on Wed, 19 Jun 2019
Hi Richard,
fond growing up memories retrieved from reading your poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Hello Childhood
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 18 Jun 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
isn't creation an amazing mystery, leaves you with so much wonder. I enjoyed your poem so much because it makes you realize how special and fragile we all actually are.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in ???? …
You've captured everything
Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2019
You've captured everything about the ocean in this poem Richard.
Beautifully done and well deserved of the cherries.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Ocean
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