your words were so moving for me, they could have been spoken by my dad. He was grateful to the hospice for their help, but he was at a point where there was absolutely nothing to live for and the pain was so bad, he couldn't...
There's something quite peaceful and dreamlike about this poem Hilary.
I love the idea of wearing a crown of seven stars and sea-serenity filling your mind. I had this image of you on a beach alone at night watching the ocean, the sky full...
Very much enjoyed reading
Posted on Fri, 01 Apr 2016
Very much enjoyed reading Tina, you gave this poem that Silver Spun Sand magic touch.
Jenny.
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Oh! Tina,
Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2016
Oh! Tina,
your words were so moving for me, they could have been spoken by my dad. He was grateful to the hospice for their help, but he was at a point where there was absolutely nothing to live for and the pain was so bad, he couldn't...
Read full commentPosted in A Passing Thought (Poetry Monthly)
Hi Terry,
Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016
Hi Terry,
I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this beautiful story, told in such a poetic way.
I admire the clarity of your words that conjured up pictures to the sequence of evens between each stanza.
...
Read full commentPosted in The Stone
I love how you end each
Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2016
I love how you end each chapter on a cliff hanger, it just keeps me reading.
Brilliant. I've even got my son engrossed too, reading out loud to him.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Net Caster (Part Seven)
A chilling read indeed. You
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2016
A chilling read indeed. You gave such a good description of the surroundings, I felt I was there.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in On this wild October Evening
There's something quite
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2016
There's something quite peaceful and dreamlike about this poem Hilary.
I love the idea of wearing a crown of seven stars and sea-serenity filling your mind. I had this image of you on a beach alone at night watching the ocean, the sky full...
Read full commentPosted in Sunlight like smiles
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 03 Mar 2016
Hi Rhiannon,
your thoughts and words in this poem match perfectly with the beautiful picture above.
Love it.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Flowing … (Poetry Monthly)
A sacred poem indeed.
Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2016
A sacred poem indeed.
Beautifully written.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Mother Of The Stillness
You are so right in this poem
Posted on Tue, 16 Feb 2016
You are so right in this poem Rhiannon, love is about the things we do rather than what we say. Through hardships love can go stronger.
I liked your poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Symbols and Substance
Can't believe I nearly missed
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2016
Can't believe I nearly missed this one Tina,
Sadly what you've written sums up the situation all too well. What's going on in the world? So many sad and innocent lives at risk...it's so insane.
A great one for the poetry monthly....
Read full commentPosted in A Borderline Case (Poetry Monthly)
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