A great tribute to this tiny bird Rhiannon. I especially loved that last stanza and had a picture of them all cuddling up together. Congrats on the well deserved cherries.
this is so beautiful and moving. To have found that special place to unwind and be creative, having memories of a past that stays with you forever is priceless.
May you continue to share those memories with us the reader....
your words were so moving for me, they could have been spoken by my dad. He was grateful to the hospice for their help, but he was at a point where there was absolutely nothing to live for and the pain was so bad, he couldn't...
There's something quite peaceful and dreamlike about this poem Hilary.
I love the idea of wearing a crown of seven stars and sea-serenity filling your mind. I had this image of you on a beach alone at night watching the ocean, the sky full...
It sounded to me like a
Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016
It sounded to me like a message from an angel, that was reminding you that there was more to having sex than just lust.
An interesting dream indeed.
Jenny.
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A great tribute to this tiny
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2016
A great tribute to this tiny bird Rhiannon. I especially loved that last stanza and had a picture of them all cuddling up together. Congrats on the well deserved cherries.
Jenny.
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Tina,
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016
Tina,
this is so beautiful and moving. To have found that special place to unwind and be creative, having memories of a past that stays with you forever is priceless.
May you continue to share those memories with us the reader....
Read full commentPosted in Not Quite Fern Hill (Poetry Monthly)
Such an exciting start to a
Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2016
Such an exciting start to a story I hope you continue on with. Just love where your imagination takes you.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ancient tales be told....old ring of gold...
Very much enjoyed reading
Posted on Fri, 01 Apr 2016
Very much enjoyed reading Tina, you gave this poem that Silver Spun Sand magic touch.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Chasing Stars
Oh! Tina,
Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2016
Oh! Tina,
your words were so moving for me, they could have been spoken by my dad. He was grateful to the hospice for their help, but he was at a point where there was absolutely nothing to live for and the pain was so bad, he couldn't...
Read full commentPosted in A Passing Thought (Poetry Monthly)
Hi Terry,
Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016
Hi Terry,
I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this beautiful story, told in such a poetic way.
I admire the clarity of your words that conjured up pictures to the sequence of evens between each stanza.
...
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I love how you end each
Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2016
I love how you end each chapter on a cliff hanger, it just keeps me reading.
Brilliant. I've even got my son engrossed too, reading out loud to him.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Net Caster (Part Seven)
A chilling read indeed. You
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2016
A chilling read indeed. You gave such a good description of the surroundings, I felt I was there.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in On this wild October Evening
There's something quite
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2016
There's something quite peaceful and dreamlike about this poem Hilary.
I love the idea of wearing a crown of seven stars and sea-serenity filling your mind. I had this image of you on a beach alone at night watching the ocean, the sky full...
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