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Oh dear! Poor Sheldon. I
Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2019
Oh dear! Poor Sheldon. I think getting lost anywhere is a nightmare and very scary, but now he's in big trouble having hurt himself badly and being alone too.
What a wonderful chapter Richard, I could feel the atmosphere of Sheldon and his dad splashing around and then the party, you describe so well their feelings. It was a pleasure to read.
Oh dear! Poor Sheldon. I
Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2019
Oh dear! Poor Sheldon. I think getting lost anywhere is a nightmare and very scary, but now he's in big trouble having hurt himself badly and being alone too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter17
Sheldon's very brave and I'm
Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2019
Sheldon's very brave and I'm glad he's been taught well by his dad and Larry. His mum will be frantic when she finds out what he's done.
I'm completely absorbed in your story Richard.
Jenny.
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I'm glad Sheldon has his mum
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
I'm glad Sheldon has his mum there to comfort him. It's sad enough when an adult looses someone special, it must be twice as hard for a child.
Hope dad keeps in contact. Well on to next part with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 14
What a happy scene you've
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
What a happy scene you've created in this chapter Richard.
On to next part with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 13
I'm glad Sheldon's dad is
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
I'm glad Sheldon's dad is back, after the last chapter I thought he'd gone again.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 12
Sounds like the children are
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
Sounds like the children are having a wonderful holiday and you're in a great part of the country too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in West Wales
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
Hello Di,
I agree with insert, I could imagine you reading this poem to an audience, it has some great metaphors too, like:-
Stream's dark tongue slow seeks
down, seep low, cleaving,
licks silt lips' stillness....
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
Still very much enjoying
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
Still very much enjoying Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 11
Oh dear! I have a feeling
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
Oh dear! I have a feeling things are about to change in Sheldon's life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 10
What a wonderful chapter
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
What a wonderful chapter Richard, I could feel the atmosphere of Sheldon and his dad splashing around and then the party, you describe so well their feelings. It was a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 9
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