Unison

By D Marie

Sun, 14 Oct 2018

6 comments

A flower opens
petal by petal.

No petal is first or last.

Each is reliant on the other
in making the bloom complete.

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Sun, 2018-10-14 12:18

lovely.

Permalink Submitted by D Marie on Sun, 2018-10-14 15:52

Thank you, celticman

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sun, 2018-10-14 12:42

So much said in so few words. I loved this inspired poem.

Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by D Marie on Sun, 2018-10-14 15:56

Thanks Jenny I'm glad you liked it.

Permalink Submitted by D Marie on Sun, 2018-10-14 15:58

Thanks editors for the cherry, nice birthday surprise!

Permalink Submitted by Nolan on Thu, 2018-11-01 11:17

she loves me not &