Chirpy, Cheeky …

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 27 Oct 2018
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Cheeky chipmunk’s
cheek-pouch cache:
dashing, snatching,
stashing fodder found
on the autumn forest floor,
bolstering its store
in its burrow underground
for a darker, colder morrow;
cheery chipmunk’s stripes
blend in leafy litter pattern,
bright-eyed fat-face packing,
stacking winter stock.

This was inspired by Michaela Strachan’s comments on Autumnwatch this year - as
https://www.abctales.com/story/rhiannonw/ch-ch-ch-ch
was inspired by her similar alliteration about chiffchaffs in Springwatch eighteen months ago.

 

Certificate U
Poem
Nature
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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What an endearing poem Rhiannon. Loved it.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny. Enjoyed playing around with it. It was very funny seeing the chipmunk stuff a big acorn in his cheek, and I think I read somewhere that they've been known to stuff 3 in each cheek, and carry one behind their teeth!! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by celticman on

it's going to be a long winter, we all should be stocking. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

as busy and cheerful as a chipmunk! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I like the darting rhythm

"dashing, snatching,
stashing fodder found"

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Di. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by forest_for_ever on

I am slightly envious at your skill in light-hearted writing.  This is a delightful piece and NO words wasted.  Really lovely to read.

forest

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

So glad you enjoyed! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Go to the ant o sluggard, consider her ways and be be wise -in the book of Proverbs. One also thinks of the parable of the ten wise maidens and the ten foolish ones.

Very good! A lesson for all of us! &&

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you! Indeed, so true. A picture of cheeful busyness, redeeming the time. Reminiscent also of Joseph telling the Egyptians they were being given time and warning to prepare for the coming famine. And our biggest preparation is worship and trust now in gospel provision! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Indeed