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Hello Di,
Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019
Hello Di,
I can just imagine you walking through the woods breathing in all that leafy air, but knowing that it won't last when autumn comes around again and blows the leaves away, a bit like ourselves, the wind brings the message that...
You have a very well spoken voice Penny. You also touched a bit of me that I have to admit identifying with. The idea of the daisy being alone is very sad. Like you say, we always try to keep intouch with old friends, but distance does make it...
I like this portrayal of a scenic walk, and the great cathedrals of cliffs, and how the waves bruise with each eruption. All you have not said flowing and spilling into hidden pools below...I suppose better left unsaid.
This is amazing onemorething, you've captured everything about natures wonders. The estuary is so full of suprises that we don't even think about, but you've written a poem that reminds us of that miracle of life.
Hello Di,
Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019
Hello Di,
I can just imagine you walking through the woods breathing in all that leafy air, but knowing that it won't last when autumn comes around again and blows the leaves away, a bit like ourselves, the wind brings the message that...
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You have a very well spoken
Posted on Tue, 13 Aug 2019
You have a very well spoken voice Penny. You also touched a bit of me that I have to admit identifying with. The idea of the daisy being alone is very sad. Like you say, we always try to keep intouch with old friends, but distance does make it...
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Hi Luigi,
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Hi Luigi,
being a lover of the Italian accent I thought your voice did so much credit to your poem.
My most treasured memories are from when I spent three weeks on holiday in the Northern part of Italy, you certainly have managed to...
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You've summed up the seasons
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
You've summed up the seasons perfectly in this poem Rhiannon. It sounds like you had fun reading and writing this one.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
I like this portrayal of a
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
I like this portrayal of a scenic walk, and the great cathedrals of cliffs, and how the waves bruise with each eruption. All you have not said flowing and spilling into hidden pools below...I suppose better left unsaid.
Hope my...
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Just finished listening to
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Just finished listening to your story insert. The saddness of loosing a child comes over really well and is so believable in your voice.
It's nice to read your written work again,but even better when read by the author.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
What a sad poem with such a
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
What a sad poem with such a tragic ending. It must have left a deep impression on you Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A Loaf of Bread
Happy days will always remain
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2019
Happy days will always remain in the memory.
Nice one Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Sand Dunes
This is amazing onemorething,
Posted on Wed, 07 Aug 2019
This is amazing onemorething, you've captured everything about natures wonders. The estuary is so full of suprises that we don't even think about, but you've written a poem that reminds us of that miracle of life.
Well deserved of the gold...
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This is such a clever poem
Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2019
This is such a clever poem onemorething. I know I've said so many times before, but your talent for metaphors is spot on. ...
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