I like this portrayal of a scenic walk, and the great cathedrals of cliffs, and how the waves bruise with each eruption. All you have not said flowing and spilling into hidden pools below...I suppose better left unsaid.
This is amazing onemorething, you've captured everything about natures wonders. The estuary is so full of suprises that we don't even think about, but you've written a poem that reminds us of that miracle of life.
arn't those nuns so tough? My partner went to a catholic school run by nuns and spent so much time getting reprimanded. The idea of the nun saying she had eyes in the back of her head, made me laugh. I could just imagine the...
I don't really know how to lay a poem out properly, I just go with what I'm feeling at the time. I remember when I first came on abc tales not really having a clue about what a poem should look like, as I'd always just written for...
An accurate description of being in bed at night in the silence and darkness and hearing the pounding of your heartbeat. Sometimes if I lay on my side at night I can hear my heart through my pillow, it's a very strange sensation indeed.
You've summed up the seasons
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
You've summed up the seasons perfectly in this poem Rhiannon. It sounds like you had fun reading and writing this one.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
I like this portrayal of a
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
I like this portrayal of a scenic walk, and the great cathedrals of cliffs, and how the waves bruise with each eruption. All you have not said flowing and spilling into hidden pools below...I suppose better left unsaid.
Hope my...
Read full commentPosted in Cathedrals
Just finished listening to
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Just finished listening to your story insert. The saddness of loosing a child comes over really well and is so believable in your voice.
It's nice to read your written work again,but even better when read by the author.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
What a sad poem with such a
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
What a sad poem with such a tragic ending. It must have left a deep impression on you Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A Loaf of Bread
Happy days will always remain
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2019
Happy days will always remain in the memory.
Nice one Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Sand Dunes
This is amazing onemorething,
Posted on Wed, 07 Aug 2019
This is amazing onemorething, you've captured everything about natures wonders. The estuary is so full of suprises that we don't even think about, but you've written a poem that reminds us of that miracle of life.
Well deserved of the gold...
Read full commentPosted in Tentacled Lagoon Worm
This is such a clever poem
Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2019
This is such a clever poem onemorething. I know I've said so many times before, but your talent for metaphors is spot on. ...
Read full commentPosted in Six Plumed Bird of Paradise
HI Richard,
Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2019
HI Richard,
arn't those nuns so tough? My partner went to a catholic school run by nuns and spent so much time getting reprimanded. The idea of the nun saying she had eyes in the back of her head, made me laugh. I could just imagine the...
Read full commentPosted in Gym Shorts and Sneakers 1963
Hi Jean,
Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2019
Hi Jean,
I don't really know how to lay a poem out properly, I just go with what I'm feeling at the time. I remember when I first came on abc tales not really having a clue about what a poem should look like, as I'd always just written for...
Read full commentPosted in Autumn's Canvas
An accurate description of
Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019
An accurate description of being in bed at night in the silence and darkness and hearing the pounding of your heartbeat. Sometimes if I lay on my side at night I can hear my heart through my pillow, it's a very strange sensation indeed.
I...
Read full commentPosted in Rubatosis
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