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Hi Richard,
Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019
Hi Richard,
I read this like you were painting on canvas and describing what you were seeing. So much of art work is down to colour. I enjoyed your impressions in a poem.
isn't it wonderful to get out whenever you choose? Sounds like you enjoyed your walk as much as we did. That little girl has certainly got the right idea. So often in our busy lives we miss all the little pleasures, but it's...
what an interesting piece of writing. We don't have that kind of thing in England, but I have seen films about these sorority organisations and they seem pretty harsh if you don't follow their rules. I wouldn't have lasted a day...
Some food for thought in this poem Rhiannon. You got me thinking about when, where and how I came to write a poem or story.I suppose it's a bit like writing a post card to someone and remembering the country or resort, but not absolutely sure...
I love how you bring Ella Fitzgerald's voice into the poem, that is a wonderful way to describe her voice. Like her voice this poem is so relaxing and unhurried, the words just flow so easily and left me with a calm feeling.
Hares live in such a fragile different world to us, I think you've incredible insight into these creatures in your poem, showing not only their courage, but also their acceptance for failure.
I was so looking forward to the next part of your story Penny, and you haven't disappointed. This little band of friends are certainly having an adventure they won't forget.
Brilliant! I also agree with airyfairy about getting it published...
Hi Richard,
Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019
Hi Richard,
I read this like you were painting on canvas and describing what you were seeing. So much of art work is down to colour. I enjoyed your impressions in a poem.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
isn't it wonderful to get out whenever you choose? Sounds like you enjoyed your walk as much as we did. That little girl has certainly got the right idea. So often in our busy lives we miss all the little pleasures, but it's...
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Hi Jean,
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
Hi Jean,
what an interesting piece of writing. We don't have that kind of thing in England, but I have seen films about these sorority organisations and they seem pretty harsh if you don't follow their rules. I wouldn't have lasted a day...
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Some food for thought in this
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
Some food for thought in this poem Rhiannon. You got me thinking about when, where and how I came to write a poem or story.I suppose it's a bit like writing a post card to someone and remembering the country or resort, but not absolutely sure...
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I love how you bring Ella
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
I love how you bring Ella Fitzgerald's voice into the poem, that is a wonderful way to describe her voice. Like her voice this poem is so relaxing and unhurried, the words just flow so easily and left me with a calm feeling.
Thank you Di...
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Great Rhinnaon and so full of
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
Great Rhinnaon and so full of fun to read, put a smile on my face.
Jenny.
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Hares live in such a fragile
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2019
Hares live in such a fragile different world to us, I think you've incredible insight into these creatures in your poem, showing not only their courage, but also their acceptance for failure.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
your descriptions bring together the enduring like minded harmony and beauty.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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We too have the same problem
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
We too have the same problem with our car mirrors, but my partner''s the driver and it doesn't seem to bother him so I just leave them alone.
Jenny.
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I was so looking forward to
Posted on Thu, 26 Sep 2019
I was so looking forward to the next part of your story Penny, and you haven't disappointed. This little band of friends are certainly having an adventure they won't forget.
Brilliant! I also agree with airyfairy about getting it published...
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 8
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