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Memories captured in
Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2019
Memories captured in Christmas decorations are some of the best. I do hope the spirit of the season is with you and your family Penny. I wish you much health and happiness for the New Year too.
Everything about this poem speaks to me, especially in that third stanza;- feeling like a visitor in the lives of others rings so true. You really hit the nail on the head when you wrote this poem, especially as I could relate to it.
I'm sure there are many people who understand the sentiments in your poem. It can be a time of expectations but also disappointments and discord. But the one thing we can rely on, is that we're not alone.
What a delicous last stanza you've created Di, all those rich colours coming together really stood out for me. In that first stanza, the idea of walking in the company of streams is a joyous thought.
I don't know why, but this reminded me of myself when I walked out of my home and ended up at the womens refuge, it's that dread of not knowing where you're going to end up, but wanting to put your trust in someone but feeling...
This poem reads like a piece of art, I could picture the scene in a water colour painting Di, with those delicate shades of black lace twigs pillard on slim-gleaming trunks. Just love those lines.
Memories captured in
Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2019
Memories captured in Christmas decorations are some of the best. I do hope the spirit of the season is with you and your family Penny. I wish you much health and happiness for the New Year too.
Jenny.
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Everything about this poem
Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2019
Everything about this poem speaks to me, especially in that third stanza;- feeling like a visitor in the lives of others rings so true. You really hit the nail on the head when you wrote this poem, especially as I could relate to it.
Hope...
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I'm sure there are many
Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2019
I'm sure there are many people who understand the sentiments in your poem. It can be a time of expectations but also disappointments and discord. But the one thing we can rely on, is that we're not alone.
Thank you for sharing.
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I am moved by your poem
Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2019
I am moved by your poem onemorething, you describe so much emotion that touches me at this time.
I do hope you have a Happy Christmas and a Healthy, Peaceful New Year.
Best wishes,
Jenny.
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Hear! Hear! Your poem spoke
Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2019
Hear! Hear! Your poem spoke to me. My sentiments exactly.
Have a great Christmas and a peaceful New Year.
Jenny.
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What a delicous last stanza
Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2019
What a delicous last stanza you've created Di, all those rich colours coming together really stood out for me. In that first stanza, the idea of walking in the company of streams is a joyous thought.
Some lovely descriptions in your poem...
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Hi Jack,
Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2019
Hi Jack,
I don't know why, but this reminded me of myself when I walked out of my home and ended up at the womens refuge, it's that dread of not knowing where you're going to end up, but wanting to put your trust in someone but feeling...
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Just love the idea of coming
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
Just love the idea of coming home to a warm house after being out in the cold.
Your poem summed it up perfectly Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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This poem reads like a piece
Posted on Thu, 28 Nov 2019
This poem reads like a piece of art, I could picture the scene in a water colour painting Di, with those delicate shades of black lace twigs pillard on slim-gleaming trunks. Just love those lines.
But then I could also see the deep...
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Beautifully written Rhiannon.
Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2019
Beautifully written Rhiannon. I just love the idea of:-
bunched ginger leaves
retained on some trees,
while most are empty skeletal
silhouetted tracery across the sky,
and:-
Long shadows,
low...
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