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what an amazing scene you've
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020
what an amazing scene you've created with words onemorething. I felt the shifting motion of movement in this meditation and you definitely took me there.
I just love the celandines and funnily enough I did think about writing a poem in honour of this beautiful little flower. Your poem goes so well with the photos and gives you a diary of how the weather captures the moments of...
I love the natural feeling of this poem onemorething. There's nothing fancy about it, more a description of this is who I am and I'm beautiful, even with my flaws.
wouldn't it be great if we could bottle moments like this and uncork them at will? Years ago I would have been sat with you and the feline, but sadly now I cannot take the sun and stay in the shade.
what an amazing scene you've
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020
what an amazing scene you've created with words onemorething. I felt the shifting motion of movement in this meditation and you definitely took me there.
Thank you for the read.
Jenny.
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Many thanks for reading and
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2020
Many thanks for reading and such a kind comment onemorething. I really take that as such a great compliment coming from a poet I much admire.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2020
Hi Rhiannon,
I just love the celandines and funnily enough I did think about writing a poem in honour of this beautiful little flower. Your poem goes so well with the photos and gives you a diary of how the weather captures the moments of...
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I love the natural feeling of
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
I love the natural feeling of this poem onemorething. There's nothing fancy about it, more a description of this is who I am and I'm beautiful, even with my flaws.
Yes! I found this poem very inspiring.
Jenny.
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for those sweet lambs - their
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
for those sweet lambs - their delight
and inoccence I swear I knew too once.
These are lines I could relate to, which is why your poem struck a chord with me.
It is truely an enchanting moon which you describe so well and do...
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Wed, 04 Mar 2020
Hi Penny,
wouldn't it be great if we could bottle moments like this and uncork them at will? Years ago I would have been sat with you and the feline, but sadly now I cannot take the sun and stay in the shade.
I did enjoy your poem...
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A fitting poem in honour of
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2020
A fitting poem in honour of Womens History Month. Also her identity shines through in your poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Waka for Murasaki Shikibu
Poor Sinead, how sad to live
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
Poor Sinead, how sad to live a life where you feel like a prisoner.
I was glad it had a lighthearted ending.
gripping read.
Jenny.
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What a great story with
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2020
What a great story with sadness, yet full of hope for the future for Josh.
Jenny.
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I've been there and it's not
Posted on Sun, 23 Feb 2020
I've been there and it's not a nice place to be. You describe it well, like the twisting of a knife.
Jenny.
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