Aren't dreams elusive. It's as if we've travelled into another dimension and had some wonderful experience, but then have no idea exactly what happened as we become more awake and aware of day to day routine.
I think we're all going through the same experience as you, I know I am, but the difference is thankfully I'm retired and enjoy dreaming and having the time to just be without any guilt.
Oh! To be young again, to run
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020
Oh! To be young again, to run and play, see and feel the Ocean and sand beneath feet.
You paint a lovely picture with words.
Jenny.
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A mouth watering poem of a
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020
A mouth watering poem of a painting indeed.
Jenny.
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Your poem is so beautiful too
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020
Your poem is so beautiful too.
Jenny.
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This is very deep Rachel.
Posted on Sat, 23 May 2020
This is very deep Rachel. There's nothing wrong with direct honesty, sometimes it's good to let it out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in How To Be Authentic
Anyting that brightens our
Posted on Thu, 21 May 2020
Anyting that brightens our day is worth writing about. Like a smile
from...
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Great beginning to your story
Posted on Tue, 19 May 2020
Great beginning to your story. You don't realize how close to the truth this story actually is.
I've always been a hundred per cent believer in other dimensions.
Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
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I'm eager to know what it is
Posted on Tue, 19 May 2020
I'm eager to know what it is they're all looking for.
Intriguing story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Roses are Red and Diamonds are Blue CHAPTER 1
I like the metaphors for life
Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020
I like the metaphors for life in this poem.
my heart can be held on consignment,
but I think about the possible outcome,
those lines sum your poem up.
I also like:-
When it's right, it's like a child warmly...
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Aren't dreams elusive. It's
Posted on Mon, 11 May 2020
Aren't dreams elusive. It's as if we've travelled into another dimension and had some wonderful experience, but then have no idea exactly what happened as we become more awake and aware of day to day routine.
Thank goodness for dreaming...
Read full commentPosted in Late April Dream (Part 2)
I think we're all going
Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020
I think we're all going through the same experience as you, I know I am, but the difference is thankfully I'm retired and enjoy dreaming and having the time to just be without any guilt.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Late April Dream (Part 1)
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