Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could bottle and cork those precious moments we share with loved ones? To be able to open at leisure, so we could with all our senses, enjoy once more.
Your words touched a chord Tina, from one who finds it...
your poems are always reflective of what you see and feel. This one arouses my feelings for nature, being one who suffers a great sorrow when yet another tree is cut down, that has maybe stood for many years and deserves to be...
I can honestly say, reading this is as near to being with my dad in the hospice after he had a massage from one of the nurses, never having had one before, he practically swooned to the point he would have kissed her, had he had...
just read this amazing poem and some of the comments, it left me speechless, as so much as already been said. The only thing I can add, is that you brought so much energy in your words, as you point out the sea can be your friend,...
A great fast moving story
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
A great fast moving story that I really enjoyed.
Jenny.
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This is such a lovely story,
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015
This is such a lovely story, which I as child at heart really enjoyed reading. I'm glad Sun saw the error of his ways in the end.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
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Thanks a million Tina, just
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015
Thanks a million Tina, just put the next part on.
You've made me very happy. ...
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could bottle and cork those precious moments we share with loved ones? To be able to open at leisure, so we could with all our senses, enjoy once more.
Your words touched a chord Tina, from one who finds it...
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Hi Rob,
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Hi Rob,
your poems are always reflective of what you see and feel. This one arouses my feelings for nature, being one who suffers a great sorrow when yet another tree is cut down, that has maybe stood for many years and deserves to be...
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Loved the metaphors in this
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Loved the metaphors in this poem:
Chaining old times to the grass as we picked it and laughed. Great line.
Also:
She lit a small candle
which flustered a seeming cool
in the bright fired air. And soon after...
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This is such a thought
Posted on Sat, 30 May 2015
This is such a thought provoking poem Shannan. I agree with Bee, just love the idea of capturing petals, before they are cried as tears.
I have many dried rose petals which I've collected over the years, they all hold memories, good and...
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Hi Tina,
Posted on Wed, 10 Jun 2015
Hi Tina,
I can honestly say, reading this is as near to being with my dad in the hospice after he had a massage from one of the nurses, never having had one before, he practically swooned to the point he would have kissed her, had he had...
Read full commentPosted in Angels Don't Dye...Do They?
Hi Rob,
Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2015
Hi Rob,
just read this amazing poem and some of the comments, it left me speechless, as so much as already been said. The only thing I can add, is that you brought so much energy in your words, as you point out the sea can be your friend,...
Read full commentPosted in 'Loyalty'
This brought back so many
Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015
This brought back so many memories for me reading. It's such an emotional piece, I found myself shedding a tear as I read.
Written with such honesty and love. I commend you for your brave homage to your mother.
I took a lot from...
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