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Some dreamy lines in this
Posted on Wed, 06 May 2020
Some dreamy lines in this poem Jane. There is a significance of a longing for space to spread your wings and break free, but being held down and loosing your way. Does this have anything to do with the lockdown and not being able to see family...
Your deep thinking is vast like the cosmos. The universe compressed into our brains makes you realize just how powerful and mysterious we actually are. As long as we understand the dangers of repetition, then it can be a stable friend.
you've captured my heart with your wonderful poem. I love it so much, I got very emotional as I read. With all the textures of the season I would love to step inside your world.
I'm a bit like you, I read a lot of books and I'm very much into fantasy, especially Terry Brooks, and have every book he's written...well! I think I have. He takes you into another world, a bit like J.R.R Tolkien's The...
I respect anyone who can write how they feel and know that whatever, it's special to them. Looking outside the box with the beauty of ambiguity, where metaphors matter. That is the true meaning of a poet.
Some dreamy lines in this
Posted on Wed, 06 May 2020
Some dreamy lines in this poem Jane. There is a significance of a longing for space to spread your wings and break free, but being held down and loosing your way. Does this have anything to do with the lockdown and not being able to see family...
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I think mathmatics of
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2020
I think mathmatics of lonliness is better too.
Jenny.
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Hi Rachel,
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2020
Hi Rachel,
you capture the loneliness of distance from love in this poem, especially in the line:-
My arms hold the absence of the weight
and the warmth of another,
I do not remember love;
There's a melancholy...
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Your deep thinking is vast
Posted on Sat, 02 May 2020
Your deep thinking is vast like the cosmos. The universe compressed into our brains makes you realize just how powerful and mysterious we actually are. As long as we understand the dangers of repetition, then it can be a stable friend.
...
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Love the mixture of sounds
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020
Love the mixture of sounds and sights coming together in harmony.
Loved the lines:-
In the woods
gorse plays yellow jazz
and bluebells psalms.in cool cathedrals, below
beech leaves singing highest green
...
Read full commentPosted in 28th April
I just wanted to say I
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
I just wanted to say I enjoyed your story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in From a distance...
Dear Miss Polly,
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
Dear Miss Polly,
you've captured my heart with your wonderful poem. I love it so much, I got very emotional as I read. With all the textures of the season I would love to step inside your world.
Thank you so much for one of the best...
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Hi again Rachel,
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi again Rachel,
I'm a bit like you, I read a lot of books and I'm very much into fantasy, especially Terry Brooks, and have every book he's written...well! I think I have. He takes you into another world, a bit like J.R.R Tolkien's The...
Read full commentPosted in The Trouble With Breathing
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Rachel,
I respect anyone who can write how they feel and know that whatever, it's special to them. Looking outside the box with the beauty of ambiguity, where metaphors matter. That is the true meaning of a poet.
Always keep...
Read full commentPosted in The Trouble With Breathing
Well! I never expected that
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2020
Well! I never expected that ending.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Seeking a soulmate
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