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Some great descriptions here
Posted on Tue, 13 Mar 2018
Some great descriptions here Richard, you could be describing the two crows that come to feed in our garden every morning, especially in the last stanza.
Being able to translate into poetry what you are seeing, is such a gift. You have that talent in bucket loads in this poem. I was with you all the way and very much enjoyed reading.
I could relate to your writing, needing to leave home as soon as possible and moving away. Those early years I like you thought the only way to experience life was to get out there and take on the challenges that came my way. ...
Great to read such an interesting part of your young history. Making history is what writing is all about and I feel privillaged to have read yours Elsie.
you know I think you were born in the wrong era. Your words are so magical and give me a sense of Pre-Raphaelite which I so adore. Also the love you convey in this poem is so beautifully told.
I loved your impression of my poem. Sunsets are all different as you so rightly pointed out. To have a hospital window facing directly where the sun rises is a unique experience in itself, especially when it looks out over the...
Some great descriptions here
Posted on Tue, 13 Mar 2018
Some great descriptions here Richard, you could be describing the two crows that come to feed in our garden every morning, especially in the last stanza.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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Being able to translate into
Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018
Being able to translate into poetry what you are seeing, is such a gift. You have that talent in bucket loads in this poem. I was with you all the way and very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny,
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What a great idea for a poem
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018
What a great idea for a poem. Love the idea of the title, 'invisible air is cut and sown' kind of said it all for me.
Enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
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Isn't it great to look back
Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018
Isn't it great to look back Richard. Those times when we could play all day and chase our dreams.
I enjoyed reading your poem and how you welcomed the snow.
Jenny.
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Just loved your poem, had me
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
Just loved your poem, had me absorbed in the story within.
Jenny.
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Hi Elsie,
Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2018
Hi Elsie,
I could relate to your writing, needing to leave home as soon as possible and moving away. Those early years I like you thought the only way to experience life was to get out there and take on the challenges that came my way. ...
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Great to read such an
Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018
Great to read such an interesting part of your young history. Making history is what writing is all about and I feel privillaged to have read yours Elsie.
Jenny.
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Hello Geraldine,
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2018
Hello Geraldine,
you know I think you were born in the wrong era. Your words are so magical and give me a sense of Pre-Raphaelite which I so adore. Also the love you convey in this poem is so beautifully told.
Engaging, passionate...
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2018
Hi Rhiannon,
I loved your impression of my poem. Sunsets are all different as you so rightly pointed out. To have a hospital window facing directly where the sun rises is a unique experience in itself, especially when it looks out over the...
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So pleased to see this poem's
Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2018
So pleased to see this poem's been cherried. Brilliant.
Jenny.
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