Funnily enough my partner's going night fishing with his son this weekend, so I expect he will be sitting thinking of me and I of him. Nice thoughtful poem.
Oh Penny, I so enjoyed reading this piece. Your shared thoughts reminded me of my own dad and how I felt when he sadly died and having to sort out the many records in his collection. Did your dad play the piano? If he did then again you would...
I can't believe I missed reading this beauty Di. I love the way you describe the tiny leaves as clasped hands joined in prayer. I always love to sow marigold seeds, they're so easy to grow and your poem described exactly how they first appear....
I have to say that I really enjoyed that first stanza, I could just picture a moss covered wall and on the other side a bank leading down to a woodland of bluebells.
I had this vision in my mind's eye of a woman sitting on a cliff top looking out to sea and reminiscing of lost love. I know I'm probably miles away from what your poem was saying, but I found it so haunting and sad, yet so poetic and written...
I can understand exactly where you're coming from Richard. It takes so many hours of hard writing and searching for answers to your questions, I think only other writers really understand the amount of time that goes into putting a piece of work...
Some wonderful use of
Posted on Sat, 14 Jul 2018
Some wonderful use of metaphors here like:-
To a pond that softly brooks and whispers,
Like nut-brown skin that lolls across
settees of dappled
sun.
Very much enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing....
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Funnily enough my partner's
Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2018
Funnily enough my partner's going night fishing with his son this weekend, so I expect he will be sitting thinking of me and I of him. Nice thoughtful poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Goin' Fishin'
Oh Penny, I so enjoyed
Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018
Oh Penny, I so enjoyed reading this piece. Your shared thoughts reminded me of my own dad and how I felt when he sadly died and having to sort out the many records in his collection. Did your dad play the piano? If he did then again you would...
Read full commentPosted in Remnants
You sum up perfectly the
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
You sum up perfectly the feelings of both siblings and parent. I could feel all those frustrations that give rise to emotions.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Choose One Cake Only
I can't believe I missed
Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018
I can't believe I missed reading this beauty Di. I love the way you describe the tiny leaves as clasped hands joined in prayer. I always love to sow marigold seeds, they're so easy to grow and your poem described exactly how they first appear....
Read full commentPosted in cotyledons
I have to say that I really
Posted on Wed, 30 May 2018
I have to say that I really enjoyed that first stanza, I could just picture a moss covered wall and on the other side a bank leading down to a woodland of bluebells.
So beautiful and mysterious.
Jenny.
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I enjoyed your poem Di, it
Posted on Mon, 28 May 2018
I enjoyed your poem Di, it had a lighthearted feel to it as I read. I could feel the cool air as the turbines rotate.
Relaxing read.
Jenny..
Read full commentPosted in renewable
I had this vision in my mind
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
I had this vision in my mind's eye of a woman sitting on a cliff top looking out to sea and reminiscing of lost love. I know I'm probably miles away from what your poem was saying, but I found it so haunting and sad, yet so poetic and written...
Read full commentPosted in wind
I can understand exactly
Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018
I can understand exactly where you're coming from Richard. It takes so many hours of hard writing and searching for answers to your questions, I think only other writers really understand the amount of time that goes into putting a piece of work...
Read full commentPosted in The Lad from Pointe de Bute (Chapters 13-14)
Hi Elsie,
Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018
Hi Elsie,
just loved reading this piece, especially the bit about:-
Festival and carnival and fireworks to bright the dull
Seventies and eighties fancy dress and shops that sell it.
Fish and chips, cornish pasty,...
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