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I've not read any of your
Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2015
I've not read any of your work as of yet. But saw your name on line and decided to take a look. I'm so glad I did, because this writing has such a wonderful natural flow. It was a pleasure to be taken on a nature ramble with you.
I too thought this a great I P Rhiannnon. I also think there's a message here, that it's never too late to change our ways, as like love_writing said, in the U turn at the end.
A thoughtful poem Bee, leading the reader to follow in the footsteps of the figure creating a landscape that is both haunting and also poingnant, but with a feeling of calm at the end.
I think poems are best written through stream of thoughts Bee. There's so many personal feelings and emotions written here, it takes your breath away reading.
I've not read any of your
Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2015
I've not read any of your work as of yet. But saw your name on line and decided to take a look. I'm so glad I did, because this writing has such a wonderful natural flow. It was a pleasure to be taken on a nature ramble with you.
Many...
Read full commentPosted in The Hill.
Beautifully detailed poem
Posted on Tue, 08 Sep 2015
Beautifully detailed poem Tina, with a dreamy quality that entranced me as a reader.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Pas de Deux for One
Goodness Tina...this is
Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015
Goodness Tina...this is crammed full of some wonderful descriptions. I could visualize all those delightful keep sakes within your poem.
A charmed read for sure.
Jenny.
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I too thought this a great I
Posted on Tue, 25 Aug 2015
I too thought this a great I P Rhiannnon. I also think there's a message here, that it's never too late to change our ways, as like love_writing said, in the U turn at the end.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Ultimate Outcome (IP)
Love the idea of Alexander,
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
Love the idea of Alexander, Kia and Kian becoming one, now they know Kian is alive and have been to his bedroom on the moon...even for a brief moment.
I could see them ploughing through the neon - like rainbows engulfing them. Your...
Read full commentPosted in Chapter 23 Children of the Moon
Phew! This was brilliantly
Posted on Tue, 11 Aug 2015
Phew! This was brilliantly scary and the end had me chilled. Can't wait to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Whistle on the wynd part 2
A thoughtful poem Bee,
Posted on Tue, 11 Aug 2015
A thoughtful poem Bee, leading the reader to follow in the footsteps of the figure creating a landscape that is both haunting and also poingnant, but with a feeling of calm at the end.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Back to Beach
A flirtatious poem Tina, when
Posted on Sun, 09 Aug 2015
A flirtatious poem Tina, when music surely is the food of love.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in An Air on a G String
I think poems are best
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2015
I think poems are best written through stream of thoughts Bee. There's so many personal feelings and emotions written here, it takes your breath away reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Beach
Hooray! For Mrs Holbrook,
Posted on Wed, 05 Aug 2015
Hooray! For Mrs Holbrook,
she reminds me of Mrs Bouquet or should I say the bucket...
Read full commentPosted in Up for Sale : Conclusion
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