Those feelings of emotional torcher, that menacing danger. One day you would grow up to be a man, a mouse no more, but still suffering the scars of those memories.
I could feel your distress within each word. I hope you find the strength...
I love the idea of the story coming from the road itself. I think if old roads could speak, what a story they'd have to tell, of the history behind how it started out and what it then became is like an autobiography, which you described so well...
Posted on Sat, 21 Nov 2015
memories come out of hiding when we look for them, but often they are never what they seem, just a fading glimpse of what we want them to be.
A haunting poem indeed Tina.
Jenny.
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Sounds like the person in
Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015
Sounds like the person in your story lives a very opulent lifestyle. Left me intrigued.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The sitting woman
The similarity of the longing
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015
The similarity of the longing for love and the willing expression given to the little bird, comes across perfectly in this poem Tina.
Jenny.
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This is a stunning piece of
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This is a stunning piece of writing Rhiannon, it has all the portrayals of the season.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in November
Very funny, put a smile on my
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
Very funny, put a smile on my face.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Audacious Auditions
There's a haunting quality to
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
There's a haunting quality to this poem that I really enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Home
Those feelings of emotional
Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015
Those feelings of emotional torcher, that menacing danger. One day you would grow up to be a man, a mouse no more, but still suffering the scars of those memories.
I could feel your distress within each word. I hope you find the strength...
Read full commentPosted in One Day The Mouse Will Roar
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sat, 14 Nov 2015
Hi Tina,
your skill at explaining going back to rekindle that spark in a relationship, is spot on in this poem.
The emotional feelings of someone getting old, the fear of loosing memory is so sad and is precisely how you explain...
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Meadows of poppies are such a
Posted on Sun, 08 Nov 2015
Meadows of poppies are such a rare thing to see, so when they appear in your garden, it's such a joy, as is your poem Tina.
Jenny.
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I love the idea of the story
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2015
I love the idea of the story coming from the road itself. I think if old roads could speak, what a story they'd have to tell, of the history behind how it started out and what it then became is like an autobiography, which you described so well...
Read full commentPosted in My Rise and Fall (I am a road) (Poetry Monthly)
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