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I can understand exactly
Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018
I can understand exactly where you're coming from Richard. It takes so many hours of hard writing and searching for answers to your questions, I think only other writers really understand the amount of time that goes into putting a piece of work...
Some great descriptions here Richard, you could be describing the two crows that come to feed in our garden every morning, especially in the last stanza.
Being able to translate into poetry what you are seeing, is such a gift. You have that talent in bucket loads in this poem. I was with you all the way and very much enjoyed reading.
I could relate to your writing, needing to leave home as soon as possible and moving away. Those early years I like you thought the only way to experience life was to get out there and take on the challenges that came my way. ...
Great to read such an interesting part of your young history. Making history is what writing is all about and I feel privillaged to have read yours Elsie.
I can understand exactly
Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018
I can understand exactly where you're coming from Richard. It takes so many hours of hard writing and searching for answers to your questions, I think only other writers really understand the amount of time that goes into putting a piece of work...
Read full commentPosted in The Lad from Pointe de Bute (Chapters 13-14)
Hi Elsie,
Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018
Hi Elsie,
just loved reading this piece, especially the bit about:-
Festival and carnival and fireworks to bright the dull
Seventies and eighties fancy dress and shops that sell it.
Fish and chips, cornish pasty,...
Read full commentPosted in Shifting Sands
I'm very much enjoying
Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018
I'm very much enjoying reading these chapters Richard. Gives great insight into another time, another place in history which always fascinates me.
I'm looking forward to finding out if there maybe love in Matties eyes.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Lad from Pointe de Bute (Chapters 13-14)
Some great descriptions here
Posted on Tue, 13 Mar 2018
Some great descriptions here Richard, you could be describing the two crows that come to feed in our garden every morning, especially in the last stanza.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A Crust
Being able to translate into
Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018
Being able to translate into poetry what you are seeing, is such a gift. You have that talent in bucket loads in this poem. I was with you all the way and very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny,
Read full commentPosted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18
What a great idea for a poem
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018
What a great idea for a poem. Love the idea of the title, 'invisible air is cut and sown' kind of said it all for me.
Enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in emperor's new clothes
Isn't it great to look back
Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018
Isn't it great to look back Richard. Those times when we could play all day and chase our dreams.
I enjoyed reading your poem and how you welcomed the snow.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Snow
Just loved your poem, had me
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
Just loved your poem, had me absorbed in the story within.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter
Hi Elsie,
Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2018
Hi Elsie,
I could relate to your writing, needing to leave home as soon as possible and moving away. Those early years I like you thought the only way to experience life was to get out there and take on the challenges that came my way. ...
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I , final chapter.
Great to read such an
Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018
Great to read such an interesting part of your young history. Making history is what writing is all about and I feel privillaged to have read yours Elsie.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I Part 2
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