Dear diary...it's Sunday afternoon, 14 th August 2022, and the temperature keeps on rising. Sitting in my garden den, thinking of the wild green man...
A squirrel would know the spirit of a tree, its inner thoughts...a language so free. As I sweltered in extreme heat – local oak informed me: “autumn'...
There's an ever rising curious connection to past within; striking against wild, bursting tempest; without the wailing vicissitude eagerly breathless...
Zeus waited till last hour to name this flower; roots creeping through darkness of soil...calling out to be noticed, will you one day become extinct...
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It sounds like a midnight to
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
It sounds like a midnight to sunrise party's a great idea. I hope Jon does come back for Perfdia, felt so sorry for the poor woman remembering the loss of her father.
I loved the idea of the veil, it adds a touch of magic and mystery to your story Paul. It also feels like he's between two worlds. I'm eager to read more, as I'm fascinated by the boy sittting on the outer ridge.
You evoke the excitement of an approaching storm, which is so apt for my part of the world. The only green comes from the trees where I live, there's been no decent rain for such a long time.
So sorry to hear about your knee pain Maxine. It's horrible to suffer. I too went through hell last year, so know exactly how you feel. Luckily my knee pain cleared up after having a hip replacement back last October. There is a light at the end...
It sounds like a midnight to
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
It sounds like a midnight to sunrise party's a great idea. I hope Jon does come back for Perfdia, felt so sorry for the poor woman remembering the loss of her father.
Looking forward to next part.
Jenny.
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I loved the idea of the veil,
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I loved the idea of the veil, it adds a touch of magic and mystery to your story Paul. It also feels like he's between two worlds. I'm eager to read more, as I'm fascinated by the boy sittting on the outer ridge.
Some haunting moments amid...
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Very appropriate words in
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
Very appropriate words in your poem Rhiannon. We're in much need of rain where I live, haven't had a good downpour for ages.
Jenny.
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Let's hope Sergeant Argent
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
Let's hope Sergeant Argent doesn't search the attic, if that's where Aefelthrith has led John Thomas.
I thought it was so funny when the Sergeant was knocking on the door and fell towards Gwlady's ample bosom. Could just picture the scene...
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Love your poem of this gifted
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2025
Love your poem of this gifted musician. He was obviously born to play in his own unique way.
That last stanza summed up the bohemian life he must have led, so beautifully. A taste of a style I love.
Thank you for sharing Turlough...
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I've known kids like Marcus,
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
I've known kids like Marcus, from when I was young. Having a dad that's been in and out of prison, it's hardly surprising the boy's ended up this way.
Unmistakably relevant narrative to the pressures of living on a Council Estate, are...
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You evoke the excitement of
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
You evoke the excitement of an approaching storm, which is so apt for my part of the world. The only green comes from the trees where I live, there's been no decent rain for such a long time.
Loved your poem Frances.
Jenny....
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So sorry to hear about your
Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2025
So sorry to hear about your knee pain Maxine. It's horrible to suffer. I too went through hell last year, so know exactly how you feel. Luckily my knee pain cleared up after having a hip replacement back last October. There is a light at the end...
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I love the layout of this
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
I love the layout of this poem Rhiannon. The sentiments are perfect too.
Jenny.
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A stunning poem Paul. Jenny.
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025
A stunning poem Paul.
Jenny.
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