A squirrel would know the spirit of a tree, its inner thoughts...a language so free. As I sweltered in extreme heat – local oak informed me: “autumn'...
There's an ever rising curious connection to past within; striking against wild, bursting tempest; without the wailing vicissitude eagerly breathless...
Zeus waited till last hour to name this flower; roots creeping through darkness of soil...calling out to be noticed, will you one day become extinct...
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Jamie has so many thoughts
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Jamie has so many thoughts running around in his head, I think it's such a real human condition, that gives us time to process and guide us through life.
I loved his interaction with his son Fox, such an adorable story about jam. My son's...
I love the mystery of those blackbirds, crows and rooks, especially when they're perched on Billy's arms. It feels like there's a time lapse, but for the guy in the Liverpool football shirt shocked at the strange sight.
As I'm reading I'm seeing an element of myself in your story. I had the chance to stay on at school and go to art college, but decided in the end money was more important. It would be good to think I had another self, who actually did go to...
Hi David, there's no way I would go to Glastonbury festival now, far too busy there for me at my age, and as for camping now...well I can't think of anything worse.
You were lucky to go there in 1987, it's more than I've achieved in my...
Your poem is a jewel to treasure Frances. It reminded me of my own early days back in the early 60s, I used to go through my late mum's jewel box with her necklesses, brooches and bracelets. I still have some of her jewels to this day, which I...
Jamie has so many thoughts
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Jamie has so many thoughts running around in his head, I think it's such a real human condition, that gives us time to process and guide us through life.
I loved his interaction with his son Fox, such an adorable story about jam. My son's...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
I love the mystery of those
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025
I love the mystery of those blackbirds, crows and rooks, especially when they're perched on Billy's arms. It feels like there's a time lapse, but for the guy in the Liverpool football shirt shocked at the strange sight.
Looking forward to...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)
You've written a sensitive
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2025
You've written a sensitive poem Turlough, with honest compassion for those going through appalling, aggressive suffering.
I can only echo many others oppositions to such atrocities.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Up to Their Ears in Tears
I'm so sorry to hear of the
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
I'm so sorry to hear of the pain you are feeling Jane. Losing a pet is devastating, especially when they've been such a big part of your family.
Your poem brings home the grief that you're feeling. I hope with time you will be able to...
Read full commentPosted in This Sad Blister
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
Hi Turlough,
your observationhs in the mall were amusing, reminds me of the Outlet village here in Swindon, right by the Steam museum.
Your mention of searching for greengrocer's and fishmonger's being a fruitless mission, rings so...
Read full commentPosted in The Sad Demise of the Plastic Triceratops
As I'm reading I'm seeing an
Posted on Mon, 23 Jun 2025
As I'm reading I'm seeing an element of myself in your story. I had the chance to stay on at school and go to art college, but decided in the end money was more important. It would be good to think I had another self, who actually did go to...
Read full commentPosted in Dead Man: 6 (ii)
Hi David, there's no way I
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
Hi David, there's no way I would go to Glastonbury festival now, far too busy there for me at my age, and as for camping now...well I can't think of anything worse.
You were lucky to go there in 1987, it's more than I've achieved in my...
Read full commentPosted in Let Me Go Back
Loved your use of words
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
Loved your use of words Rhiannon. I think you just about summed up the I. P. perfectly.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Whatever the weather …
I was so involved in this
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
I was so involved in this thoroughly atmospheric and spell binding story Paul.
Bewitching read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)
Your poem is a jewel to
Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025
Your poem is a jewel to treasure Frances. It reminded me of my own early days back in the early 60s, I used to go through my late mum's jewel box with her necklesses, brooches and bracelets. I still have some of her jewels to this day, which I...
Read full commentPosted in My Jewel Box
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