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It certainly had a shape and
Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024
It certainly had a shape and completeness though stirring the thoughts of 'could it have been otherwise' and 'what brought it all about'. I think what was most shocking, but realistic, was the confession that he had deliberately provoked their...
It is a real problem! My frustration is that parents are so often talking to their young children while looking at their phone. Children need eye-contact and the feeling of undivided attention and interest. Rhiannon
I seem to have missed this before. You always write smoothly. I still think that the intrigue of claimed mysterious sightings, whether trickery, imagination or real are a distraction from investigating the mysteries of life whose sollutions have...
Thanks. Maybe they had it coming, but we mustn't shut them off from the possiblitiy of repentance and reformation. Being found out is sometimes a blessing, as our children come to realise!
The reference to the parable of the Pharisee and...
Thanks. No, I didn't put/have a rhyme for dialogue. Treated it as a longer line! I don't put in rhymes for the sake of it, but if they fit and enhance the meaning and are failrly unobtrusive they do aid the flow and impact and readability!...
the skilled artistry of writers with their nimble fingers,
That phrase amused and intrigued me a little: I thought, isn't it the nimble mind that is sorting out what to write, but then I realised the thoughts must be caught by the...
Lovely to have noticing eyes and mind to see beauty and the interest of variations in everything around all the time. Do you use your observations in artwork as well as writing and enjoyment of thought? Rhiannon
I'm sorry to hear you are experiecing such pain and illness, Jenny. That video is a lovely collection of images. Visiting such places that I have never been to and never will! It is good that we have such available now, and of course memories to...
It certainly had a shape and
Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024
It certainly had a shape and completeness though stirring the thoughts of 'could it have been otherwise' and 'what brought it all about'. I think what was most shocking, but realistic, was the confession that he had deliberately provoked their...
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It is a real problem! My
Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024
It is a real problem! My frustration is that parents are so often talking to their young children while looking at their phone. Children need eye-contact and the feeling of undivided attention and interest. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in A Martian Sends a Postcard Home 2024
I seem to have missed this
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024
I seem to have missed this before. You always write smoothly. I still think that the intrigue of claimed mysterious sightings, whether trickery, imagination or real are a distraction from investigating the mysteries of life whose sollutions have...
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What a lovely description of
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024
What a lovely description of your place of relaxation! Rhiannon
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Thanks. Maybe they had it
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024
Thanks. Maybe they had it coming, but we mustn't shut them off from the possiblitiy of repentance and reformation. Being found out is sometimes a blessing, as our children come to realise!
The reference to the parable of the Pharisee and...
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Thanks. No, I didn't put/have
Posted on Mon, 05 Aug 2024
Thanks. No, I didn't put/have a rhyme for dialogue. Treated it as a longer line! I don't put in rhymes for the sake of it, but if they fit and enhance the meaning and are failrly unobtrusive they do aid the flow and impact and readability!...
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the skilled artistry of
Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024
the skilled artistry of writers with their nimble fingers,
That phrase amused and intrigued me a little: I thought, isn't it the nimble mind that is sorting out what to write, but then I realised the thoughts must be caught by the...
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Thank you, Jenny.
Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024
Thank you, Jenny.
There is so much wielding of knives, sometimes meant for 'enemies' though even then sometimes others getting hurt or killed.
There is a generation that has been robbed of training and foundations by example and...
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Lovely to have noticing eyes
Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024
Lovely to have noticing eyes and mind to see beauty and the interest of variations in everything around all the time. Do you use your observations in artwork as well as writing and enjoyment of thought? Rhiannon
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I'm sorry to hear you are
Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024
I'm sorry to hear you are experiecing such pain and illness, Jenny. That video is a lovely collection of images. Visiting such places that I have never been to and never will! It is good that we have such available now, and of course memories to...
Read full commentPosted in Suspended Between Two Worlds
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