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A tick in time (Revision) (Poetry Monthly)
As encouraged by Tony, I have worked further on the rhythm of this poem, but I would value critical comment. The first version is still posted if any want to compare. [seconds ticking, flicking by …]
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A tick in time (Poetry Monthly)
seconds ticking, flicking by – notches on the wall – kids grow
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He Pressed On, Though Knowing
[today a a hymn looking towards Easter] He had to go to Calvary to rescue me. He travelled to Jerusalem though knowing men would there reject and...
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Ensnared
Enticing coyly, words cloying, oily, teasing, easing, sleazily seizing, trickles of tickly tricking, trapping with sugary wrapping, sweetly lulling,...
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A busy mozzie’s buzz
Vibrations in front and behind, that reverberate round in my mind –
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