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Before Jesus came
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The prophets and the law were teaching long before about true holiness, salvation from sin’s mess – much needed grace that God would bring: accept and honour Christ the King. …
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Cautionary Pictures 6)
Peer pressure: see them scheme schemes that are not what they seem …
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The Shrimp's Eye
Biomimetics 4) Deep in the bottom of the ocean (light level low) …they hadn’t thought of the ‘genius’ of the shrimp solution …
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Faced with Life Choices
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Lot chose the best, and left the rest to Abraham. In Sodom, though, he soon would know deep problems come. When faced with choice heed scripture’s voice …
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Jumping to Assumptions
He thought he saw – and told his friends – a floating, waving ghost. They looked themselves and saw it was washed clothes caught round a post. He...
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Can't say I understand all
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Can't say I understand all your musings here, Tina. But I'm happy that scripture makes clear that Jesus is coming back, but that will be the culmination of all, - yes the resurrection of the dead, but also a judgement, so that it is so important...
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Apart from your usual
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Apart from your usual niftyness with rhythm and rhyme, Alvin, you have opened up, with a light touch, good thoughts about developing a loving care, a real constant sharing and thinking of the others ups and downs, and needs, and not just '...
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Is the picture yours, Bee?
Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2014
Is the picture yours, Bee? This has a lovely feel of painting someone and mixing it with memories and so many thoughts of the person that can't be painted on and yet somehow can affect the painting to somehow impart character and experiences....
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Well, Bee, it just shows - I
Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2014
Well, Bee, it just shows - I only just noticed this now, because I checked on you, as so often I mostly have a check of the new poetry. I too have a growing list of contributors, many of whom mostly do prose only, and see what I can follow. I've...
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Hi, Moya, read all three
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
Hi, Moya, read all three parts together. You seem to have started on a huge labour!
Read full commentI was intrigued by your moving from 'the big, bad businesses' and the pleasure people have in laying into anonymous people as a group, to the more personal...
Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Three
A beautiful place, well
Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014
A beautiful place, well described, which I know well, though this seems to have been a sad, poignant journey up. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Mynydd Carningli (for TP's parents)
Nice to remember these family
Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2014
Nice to remember these family and funny incidents. I feel all such malapropisms I've heard have comepletly gone from my mind, but maybe some will come back. I do remember one of my sons who was reading quite early asking, with bewilderment why...
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A lovely crafted and
Posted on Sun, 09 Mar 2014
A lovely crafted and inspiring poem, Linda. I especially also like the first stanza with the description of the bustling crowd and the happy couples compared to the speaker's loneliness.
I did wonder in the 3rd stanza, 3rd line, whether...
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You have managed to
Posted on Sun, 12 Jan 2014
You have managed to articulate so much, so clearly, so many feelings explained, carrying us right through the so difficult time, the emotions, and the coping. Rhiannon
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I enjoyed this, thank you.
Posted on Wed, 01 Jan 2014
I enjoyed this, thank you. Especially the first two stanzas, and the sense of hush and quiet that snow brings. Rhiannon
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