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A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon
Azure sky green leaves lie against the blue, and puffs of white float by. All is quiet except a wood-pigeon’s constant thrusting note. A car sweeps...
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The generous enriched
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The generous will reap – impoverished those who keep from sharing what they can and should, begrudging to do...
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Crisis Moment
Battle in the blood: hostile invaders immobilised, stabbed, or eaten …crisis as invaders beaten …
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God promised …
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A future descendant will deal with the devil, that snake who so slyly has drawn you to evil, to question My...
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From dawn ’til …
The country sleeps … the beginning and ending of another day.
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Can't say I understand all
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Can't say I understand all your musings here, Tina. But I'm happy that scripture makes clear that Jesus is coming back, but that will be the culmination of all, - yes the resurrection of the dead, but also a judgement, so that it is so important...
Read full commentPosted in A Sudden Resurrection (I.P.)
Apart from your usual
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Apart from your usual niftyness with rhythm and rhyme, Alvin, you have opened up, with a light touch, good thoughts about developing a loving care, a real constant sharing and thinking of the others ups and downs, and needs, and not just '...
Read full commentPosted in I NEVER HEARD HER CRY
Is the picture yours, Bee?
Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2014
Is the picture yours, Bee? This has a lovely feel of painting someone and mixing it with memories and so many thoughts of the person that can't be painted on and yet somehow can affect the painting to somehow impart character and experiences....
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Well, Bee, it just shows - I
Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2014
Well, Bee, it just shows - I only just noticed this now, because I checked on you, as so often I mostly have a check of the new poetry. I too have a growing list of contributors, many of whom mostly do prose only, and see what I can follow. I've...
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Hi, Moya, read all three
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
Hi, Moya, read all three parts together. You seem to have started on a huge labour!
Read full commentI was intrigued by your moving from 'the big, bad businesses' and the pleasure people have in laying into anonymous people as a group, to the more personal...
Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Three
A beautiful place, well
Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014
A beautiful place, well described, which I know well, though this seems to have been a sad, poignant journey up. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Mynydd Carningli (for TP's parents)
Nice to remember these family
Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2014
Nice to remember these family and funny incidents. I feel all such malapropisms I've heard have comepletly gone from my mind, but maybe some will come back. I do remember one of my sons who was reading quite early asking, with bewilderment why...
Read full commentPosted in Out of the Mouths...(I.P.)
A lovely tribute, and of the
Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2014
A lovely tribute, and of the effect of such loss. Enjoyed reading, and thought of many maybe who haven't known such love.
Read full commentMaybe in time thoughts of what she now would have been said to you if she could will help. And, of course, prayer, for...
Posted in Unconditional
A lovely crafted and
Posted on Sun, 09 Mar 2014
A lovely crafted and inspiring poem, Linda. I especially also like the first stanza with the description of the bustling crowd and the happy couples compared to the speaker's loneliness.
I did wonder in the 3rd stanza, 3rd line, whether...
Read full commentPosted in THE LONELY WANDERER (I.P.)
You have managed to
Posted on Sun, 12 Jan 2014
You have managed to articulate so much, so clearly, so many feelings explained, carrying us right through the so difficult time, the emotions, and the coping. Rhiannon
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