I NEVER HEARD HER CRY

Cherry

By moonphish

Sat, 19 Apr 2014
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i don't know why i left her
for she wasn't all that bad
in retrospect, she may have been
the best girl that i've had
.
we drifted down a river
like canoes, a foot apart
but drifted as the current spun
in mind as well as heart
.
i've searched way down within myself
to find the reason why
she never heard me sing at all
i never heard her cry
.
its strange when people share a life
then feel they're left alone
the voices that once mingled
grew as silent as a stone
.
although the only trace of her
is perfume in the air
i find i often turn around
expecting she is there
.
the summer turned to winter
but it never turned to spring
i never heard her cry at all
she never heard me sing
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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Apart from your usual niftyness with rhythm and rhyme, Alvin, you have opened up, with a light touch,  good thoughts about developing a loving care, a real constant sharing and thinking of the others ups and downs, and needs, and not just 'getting used to them being there'. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much Rhiannon...what lovely comments - alvin