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StoryGive and Take luigi_pagano87 years 1 month ago
StoryCircle from Craswall 11/1/19 Rhiannonw257 years 2 months ago
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StorySomebody Sang and I saw the Colour Blue Jane Hyphen187 years 2 months ago
StoryDown Memory Lane luigi_pagano87 years 2 months ago
StoryDon't Make Any Deals With God mcscraic27 years 2 months ago
Storygrab a granny celticman157 years 2 months ago
StoryLess is More (More or Less) luigi_pagano47 years 2 months ago
StoryDrift rosaliekempthorne77 years 2 months ago
StoryPress On! Rhiannonw07 years 2 months ago
StoryActual Action Rhiannonw67 years 2 months ago
StoryChances ( 2) jolono137 years 2 months ago
StoryTo be lost in space? Rhiannonw37 years 2 months ago
Story“Stonking Views”, it said Rhiannonw107 years 2 months ago
StoryBlessed Rapport Rhiannonw07 years 2 months ago
StoryMy Piggy Bank (Saving IP) well-wisher67 years 2 months ago
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StoryAn 18 month-old meets Penelope the Penguin Rhiannonw107 years 2 months ago
StoryHelp For Hero's. Maxine Jasmin-Green87 years 2 months ago

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Gathered people of God

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Last Sunday was Pentecost Sunday, regarded as the birthday of Christ Jesus’ church (‘church’ referring to the gathered people of God, not the building) Tired of godlessness and spite, longing for the place of light, …

Journeying over the gulf

Can I go back? Can we heal the rift? … so far a journey, a gulf so wide

Wall Decoration

Red brick wall, patch of crumbling mortar: roots take hold, space fills so greenery, sprinkled with pointed bells of blue campanula spills over:...

Wherever

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] It is too wonderful to plumb how wide and full your scanning sight, your knowledge of my inmost thought, in...
Cherry

Shiny Brown

Rain or sun we’ll have fun in the squelchy and squishy jump and splash it thickly melted-chocolate sticky of the path in the wood today: bluebells...

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I really liked the way you

Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015

I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...

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Horrible, Bee. Getting

Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015

Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon

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A lot of concentrated vivid

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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Interesting cameo of bright

Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015

Interesting cameo of bright memories, a bit like Jolono's recent 'Under a London Sky' memories of the beginning of a courtship. I liked ''Occasion marked: Us and 'Coat-hanger tourists' too. The Brolga Dance certainly sounded...

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Your collection of images in

Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015

Your collection of images in the early part of this is breathtaking as usual, and displays your noticing eye and clarity of putting the images into words succinctly for others.

– but poetry can be about all sorts of things, the pleasant,...

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Posted in Ars Poetica

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… but as you said, it is the

Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2015

… but as you said, it is the space between that is full of good memories. Here the beginning, so beautifully described, and such pleasure, and seen now as the beginning of a full life, despite all the hardships, and the agony of parting. Rhiannon

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Posted in Epiphany

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I hadn't really realised the

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

I hadn't really realised the length of time involved from the  beginning of the trouble, or how much was done at each stage of better health. This fills in so much of  'the spaces between' all along the way, the very hard spaces, and the happier...

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Posted in The Story of One Remarkable Lady

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I'm afraid I hadn't noticed

Posted on Sun, 14 Dec 2014

I'm afraid I hadn't noticed this last week. It has an intriguing wistfulness. Love the feeling of the wind, and the sounds can be so varied and odd - nice when comfy indoors, like the sounds of the rain. Rhiannon

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Posted in Wild and Beautiful

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You've rephrased some of

Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014

You've rephrased some of these thoughts, while redrawing the moment (stopping the clock in a sense) and there is much tender beauty in the captured scene, linked to past memories, and present struggles, which could help others. Rhiannon

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Posted in Quarter to January

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The interview with

Posted on Tue, 16 Dec 2014

The interview with Ipnasoletok is fascinating. Was the ban on speaking their languages lifted in later years? It reminds me of youngsters in Wales years ago having to wear a board saying 'Welsh Not' i think if caught speaking the language, but in...

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Posted in We Who Survived -16 - Perrin Whitman and the Indians -part 3

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