Rhiannonw
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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Vital | Rhiannonw | 0 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Before I Go... | forest_for_ever | 6 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | The Melting Iceberg | hilary west | 9 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Winter Is Here | FallenAngel | 1 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | BREXIT | hilary west | 6 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Give and Take | luigi_pagano | 8 | 7 years 1 month ago |
| Story | Circle from Craswall 11/1/19 | Rhiannonw | 25 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Lord Timmy Dinmore | TonyC25 | 5 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Butternut Squash | hilary west | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Somebody Sang and I saw the Colour Blue | Jane Hyphen | 18 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Down Memory Lane | luigi_pagano | 8 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Don't Make Any Deals With God | mcscraic | 2 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | grab a granny | celticman | 15 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Less is More (More or Less) | luigi_pagano | 4 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Drift | rosaliekempthorne | 7 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Press On! | Rhiannonw | 0 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Actual Action | Rhiannonw | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Chances ( 2) | jolono | 13 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | To be lost in space? | Rhiannonw | 3 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | “Stonking Views”, it said | Rhiannonw | 10 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Blessed Rapport | Rhiannonw | 0 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | My Piggy Bank (Saving IP) | well-wisher | 6 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | lost in space | Di_Hard | 4 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | An 18 month-old meets Penelope the Penguin | Rhiannonw | 10 | 7 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Help For Hero's. | Maxine Jasmin-Green | 8 | 7 years 2 months ago |








I really liked the way you
Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015
I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...
Read full commentPosted in uncorrected proof two.
Horrible, Bee. Getting
Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015
Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Giving Them a VOICE
A lot of concentrated vivid
Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015
A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Earth Heart (3)
Interesting cameo of bright
Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015
Interesting cameo of bright memories, a bit like Jolono's recent 'Under a London Sky' memories of the beginning of a courtship. I liked ''Occasion marked: Us and 'Coat-hanger tourists' too. The Brolga Dance certainly sounded...
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Your collection of images in
Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015
Your collection of images in the early part of this is breathtaking as usual, and displays your noticing eye and clarity of putting the images into words succinctly for others.
– but poetry can be about all sorts of things, the pleasant,...
Read full commentPosted in Ars Poetica
… but as you said, it is the
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2015
… but as you said, it is the space between that is full of good memories. Here the beginning, so beautifully described, and such pleasure, and seen now as the beginning of a full life, despite all the hardships, and the agony of parting. Rhiannon
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I hadn't really realised the
Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015
I hadn't really realised the length of time involved from the beginning of the trouble, or how much was done at each stage of better health. This fills in so much of 'the spaces between' all along the way, the very hard spaces, and the happier...
Read full commentPosted in The Story of One Remarkable Lady
I'm afraid I hadn't noticed
Posted on Sun, 14 Dec 2014
I'm afraid I hadn't noticed this last week. It has an intriguing wistfulness. Love the feeling of the wind, and the sounds can be so varied and odd - nice when comfy indoors, like the sounds of the rain. Rhiannon
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You've rephrased some of
Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014
You've rephrased some of these thoughts, while redrawing the moment (stopping the clock in a sense) and there is much tender beauty in the captured scene, linked to past memories, and present struggles, which could help others. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Quarter to January
The interview with
Posted on Tue, 16 Dec 2014
The interview with Ipnasoletok is fascinating. Was the ban on speaking their languages lifted in later years? It reminds me of youngsters in Wales years ago having to wear a board saying 'Welsh Not' i think if caught speaking the language, but in...
Read full commentPosted in We Who Survived -16 - Perrin Whitman and the Indians -part 3
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