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Certainties for a New Year
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] There is a God who ever lives, and we have known the help he gives: a Shelter, Rock who hears our prayer –...
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Near Upper Kinsham
(28/12/21) Out into the soggy countryside such a thrill after so long confinement when somewhat ill. Feeling the freshness of air and breeze, hearing...
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Toy Explosion …
… at Christmas … So many toys sold – away with the old! Hide them from view, make way for the new! Presents in droves, shortage of shelves, tuck some...
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Relationship
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “Immanuel” means “God with us” – to you is he a stranger? He wants a real relationship, so came, lay in a...
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Turn of the year ’scape
Scrawny trees stark on pale clear sky tangled twigs and mistletoe orbs; jaded damp sodden turf, wintery stillnes ’til sudden stormy shake of blasting...
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I catch whisps of where you
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I catch whisps of where you are coming from, but then revert to feeling your playing with the reader with a mixture of eerie and trying to provoke discomfort, always with your rolling rhymes and rhythm, mixing a real message with a bit of...
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I like what you have written
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I like what you have written about the false glitz and warmth at Christmas, the wearying distractions to true delight and happiness, satisfying service, and worship.
The early part also made me think of 'when the time had fully come, God...
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Pleasant companionship
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
Pleasant companionship warming the hard seasons. Interesting interjection of the respite in winter from summer labours. Rhiannon
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gives the feeling of no-one
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
gives the feeling of no-one to remember and grieve him, memory of him blown away. Sad. Rhiannon
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This did make me think, Tina,
Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015
This did make me think, Tina, of so many who feel the loss of a daughter or son of whom they never had good memories, a loss double. Memories so sweet must hurt so much, but you wouldn't have not had them, I'm sure.
I did so like the last...
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This is very effective. The
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.
If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course, I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling...
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This reminded me somehow
Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015
This reminded me somehow about the book of Ecclesiastes, where the imperfectness of everything, incompleteness in this life is shown. I think maybe I'll have to come back to this, there's so much there, so many different metaphors to think about...
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bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy view, then the slog (reinvigorated?) Rhiannon
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I liked this too, though I
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
I liked this too, though I also thought you might think of a stronger climax line. The last but one seems to balance the third - disjointedness and then your world coming together, presumably a sense of things making sense, fitting together,...
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Not easy to show friendship
Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015
Not easy to show friendship when someone is wanting to withdraw to private memories, but to show affection, and will be there when conversation wanted? Rhiannon
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