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Prison Walls bring hope!*
The walls incarcerated men, confined, blocked out the tortured moans of battered minds and bones; but see! they hold up messages of hope … and hear! those walls have now become a sounding board – tap tap, tap …
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Essential Cycle
There’s a crowd of us here where we’re forming a screen shading and cooling the place I have been; soon we will bunch – each group falling …
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'Come, Lord Jesus.’
How many scoff, deny, forget – they do not want to know … Every eye will one day see Him, Jesus returning, majestic, reigning: how many will be waiting with faith, upon the earth?
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The Fat Controller appreciated useful, helpful engines
Snowflakes … bulldozers … treasures …
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Peacemakers know joy
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundtays series} When you’re making plans for good, doing all you can and could to encourage all to be seeking peace...
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Certainly surreal, Terry, and
Posted on Sun, 30 Aug 2015
Certainly surreal, Terry, and having fun with how many of the rhymes you could weave such a tale around I guess! And keep the rhythm going. It's always interesting to see the traditional mediaeval myth feel of such tales interjected with the...
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So sad, effectively told in
Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015
So sad, effectively told in its simplicity and brevity. Is it based on a number of incidents or one in particular? Rhiannon
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Very sad. I expect if you are
Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015
Very sad. I expect if you are waiting for a possible explanation if feels like it may solve something for you, though probably it wouldn't really make a difference to the shattering bereavement. The 'whether to have a PM or not' must be so hard,...
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It's even more difficult if
Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015
It's even more difficult if you're talking to someone who seems to feel an obligation to continue, and doesn't pick up on the hints that you feel that you need to go, but you don't want to lie about a committment, but you can't really say, 'I've...
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the action of waves, real and
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2015
the action of waves, real and metaphoric, haven't got my head totally around the beachcombing. The waves wash away and bring in flotsam and jetsam?
Read full commentInprints = Imprints?
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Posted in Beach
the abyss of your absence
Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015
the abyss of your absence such a telling phrase in so many situations. Though it does reflect a good relationship that has been experienced. And for you, the shared enjoyment of the details of your surroundings, especially the nature...
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There is a lot of lovely
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2015
There is a lot of lovely metaphor again here, maybe rather concentrated for taking it all in? The chorus is lovely and I liked Enticing the sun into scything the night, starry-eyed very much.
Read full commentThe whole rhythmic form is well worked...
Posted in Sleep In My Arms Lullaby
Very cleverly written. I too
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2015
Very cleverly written. I too like acrostic poems, but so often they do feel rather forced, but this doesn't, and the bringing in of the initial letters for each line seems very neatly done. I particularly like the lines Threatening all but...
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Hungry, alive Injured,
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015
Hungry, alive Injured, survived brought to mind those feelings of many after disasters.
Read full commentExhausted, taxed drew such an unexpected lesson for perservering.
It also brought to my mind how being puffed up and...
Posted in Positive Thinking
You have a knack of
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
You have a knack of describing your feelings. When I had to wake to my father-in-law's calls, when he was still here, I got to frequently not be able to get back to sleep, and in the end found I had to mix sometimes doing something (reading,...
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