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By Rhiannonw on Fri, 03 Dec 2021

… and every day there’s 3 main meals …

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Procrastination

By Rhiannonw on Fri, 03 Dec 2021

It may be too late, but never too soon, to say you are sorry, and get a duty done. Never too soon to remember your promise, but better late than...

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By Rhiannonw on Thu, 02 Dec 2021

2 hands to …

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bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy

Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015

bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy view, then the slog (reinvigorated?) Rhiannon

Posted in Monday Night

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I liked this too, though I

Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015

I liked this too, though I also thought you might think of a stronger climax line. The last but one seems to balance the third - disjointedness and then your world coming together, presumably a sense of things making sense, fitting together,...

Posted in discord to harmony (revised)

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Not easy to show friendship

Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015

Not easy to show friendship when someone is wanting to withdraw to private memories, but to show affection, and will be there when conversation wanted? Rhiannon

Posted in Where the Seabirds Fly

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You seem to have captured

Posted on Mon, 12 Oct 2015

You seem to have captured something of that strange feeling of convalesence (salt on the arm!), when the mind (and body) is not working quite normally yet (slight temperature still, perhaps), and trying to come to terms with life again. The sight...

Posted in Reflections

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Seems like a maturing of

Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2015

Seems like a maturing of companionship as age and the turmoils of life creep in. Rhiannon

Posted in It was Summer - that First Morning

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I like the way you 'throw in'

Posted on Wed, 07 Oct 2015

I like the way you 'throw in' lines like about the difficulties of finding the way out in IKEA (living so far from one, we have found them quite overwhelming on our occasional visits!) and not having time to think about the emptiness that will...

Posted in Stepping Stones (Poetry Monthly)

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So honest, so sad, so simply

Posted on Sat, 03 Oct 2015

So honest, so sad, so simply and clearly written. There does seem some sort of deep caring love there, and a trusting love to some extent, but that can't (at present) meet, and a looking for excitement that won't satisfy. Rhiannon

Posted in Clocking In

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Some interesting thought

Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015

Some interesting thought threads here, Terry, and play on the sounds of vale/veil/countervail.
In line 3 is it meant to be 'vail'' or veil' ?

Posted in Vale of Tears

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So important, those last two

Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015

So important, those last two lines, and the whole poem speaks of imortant things being 'taught' that are probably unnoticed by many, rather than the whisking of children hither and thither for special experiences and 'education'. I think we found...

Posted in A Natural Mum

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Nice little incident. There

Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015

Nice little incident. There are often those occasional little sparks of communiation, memories, and humour that help to realise that the confused person is still there somewhere inside, and help to be able to show love and warmth more...