[this poem is based on/inspired by/semi-translation of a Welsh poem by I D Hooson (1880-1948)] I saw you in the wild, dancing … I saw you in a vase, still …
His mind directs his vocal chords, vibrations emanate. They reach an ear, and so his words its tunnel permeate The ear-drum trembles – tiny bones the...
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I'm sorry, i missed noticing
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
I'm sorry, i missed noticing this last week. You are keeping up the intriguing mix of the ordinary and quirky fantasy (smelly sneakers and Dad's long-ago fantasy adventure) I was amused by the comment of the 'dog' having 'to accommodate her...
Of course it's sometimes easy to just say, 'Oh, I don't remember', and carry on before it gets anyone worried! Once in a film, someone gave the name of something in Welsh, and what it actually meant was 'whatdyoucallit'! When I was growing up,...
Much there of the time of year, especially on brighter days. We've just been out in the countryside with the late afternoon shadows and glinting sunshine (which may form into a poem soon!)
The stars of the clear night well protrayed too....
thanks.Yes! it's no wonder Rev Awdry and others have put faces on them is it? My father's first car was called Canta because, he said, 'Canta Ford it'! There is a Welsh rhyme for children about 'Morus y gwynt' (Morris the wind) so my friend's...
A so sad story, but showing much understanding of the emotions of both. There seems a determination to get through it in respect to their relation. I suppose that is the hope in the last sentences. I expect that her hope in the cat comes from her...
Nice to have some of the landscapes described as well as the archeological wonders.
The travelling sounds exhausting, so easier to be an armchair reader. I was thinking aboiut your desire to learn Bulgarian once setteld there to be able to...
I'm sorry, i missed noticing
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
I'm sorry, i missed noticing this last week. You are keeping up the intriguing mix of the ordinary and quirky fantasy (smelly sneakers and Dad's long-ago fantasy adventure) I was amused by the comment of the 'dog' having 'to accommodate her...
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it will take some unravelling
Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024
it will take some unravelling. Rhiannon
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Of course it's sometimes easy
Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024
Of course it's sometimes easy to just say, 'Oh, I don't remember', and carry on before it gets anyone worried! Once in a film, someone gave the name of something in Welsh, and what it actually meant was 'whatdyoucallit'! When I was growing up,...
Read full commentPosted in Forgetting something? Just say London Bridge.
Much there of the time of
Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024
Much there of the time of year, especially on brighter days. We've just been out in the countryside with the late afternoon shadows and glinting sunshine (which may form into a poem soon!)
The stars of the clear night well protrayed too....
Read full commentPosted in After the Snow
I think your writing was more
Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024
I think your writing was more visual than the photo, with the moon through and on the trees, and the wind howling through!
Particularly liked the last 3 lines (though, now unseen, its 'caressing' work will continue!) Wasn't sure of the...
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thanks.Yes! it's no wonder
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2024
thanks.Yes! it's no wonder Rev Awdry and others have put faces on them is it? My father's first car was called Canta because, he said, 'Canta Ford it'! There is a Welsh rhyme for children about 'Morus y gwynt' (Morris the wind) so my friend's...
Read full commentPosted in What happened, little car?
Amusing mix of the fantastic
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Amusing mix of the fantastic with the very ordinary smelly sneakers! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 1
Nice twist! Sympathy and
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
Nice twist! Sympathy and being able to give and take help and accept vulnarablitiy and imperfections makes for good relationships and happy. Rhiannon
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A so sad story, but showing
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
A so sad story, but showing much understanding of the emotions of both. There seems a determination to get through it in respect to their relation. I suppose that is the hope in the last sentences. I expect that her hope in the cat comes from her...
Read full commentPosted in Enoshima (Part Two of Two)
Nice to have some of the
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
Nice to have some of the landscapes described as well as the archeological wonders.
Read full commentThe travelling sounds exhausting, so easier to be an armchair reader. I was thinking aboiut your desire to learn Bulgarian once setteld there to be able to...
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