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197 of my comments have received 214 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent.  Now get your

Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2013

Excellent.  Now get your sleeves rolled up, start writing and get stuck in!

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This is our Facebook and Twitter pick of the day!

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That is such a simple and

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015

That is such a simple and well-observed poem.  Well done.
 

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Welcome to ABCtales

Posted on Mon, 16 Nov 2015

Lovely poem, Marcia.  Thank you for posting it.
 

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I agree with love_writing,

Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015

I agree with love_writing, especially their observation about the possibilities of working in first person.

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Welcome to ABCtales

Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015

Well I think this is pretty good for someone new to writing.

The fear and confusion that you create for the main character and the way you invest the reader into her psyche is very good.  The use of present tense heightens the immediacy (...

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'the number in (of) cars in

Posted on Fri, 30 Oct 2015

'the number in (of) cars in front to five'.

Smooth-as-you-like-writing, Ewan yes   

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Welcome to ABCtales.

Posted on Thu, 29 Oct 2015

Hi FREI,

This is a good start.  I like this old man and this life apart from things.  The way you have drawn him invests a character that knows much more and much less than others might give him credit for.  I love his setting and the...

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Welcome to ABCtales.

Posted on Sat, 10 Oct 2015

This is a wonderful poem Papa Kologne.  Tremendous build towards the end.  Really well done.

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Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015

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