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Posted on Thu, 20 Aug 2015
That's a great write and I completely agree with jolono's observations. The voice is authentic and unpretentious and there's an undeniable honesty and willingness to confont the things that are often pushed out of mind because that's the easier...
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A twist!
Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015
That's a killer, unexpected last line! It threw this erstwhile metaphorical vignette into shockingly stark focus.
Well done and welcome to ABCtales.
Read full commentPosted in Weeping Willow
The writing's ok. I like it
Posted on Thu, 13 Aug 2015
The writing's ok. I like it when you explore the metaphor. Maybe you could explore the potential for this to become a prose poem.
Read full commentPosted in Soft Men Don't Stay
This is great AD1 and I'm not
Posted on Sun, 09 Aug 2015
This is great AD1 and I'm not keen on the genre. It definitely needs a thorough edit but it's SO worth spending the time on.
Read full commentPosted in whistle on the Wynd
Nicely done
Posted on Sat, 08 Aug 2015
This really is very good. Excellent introspection that serves to draw an intriguing and very interesting character. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in The Path of the Black Cat
Welcome
Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2015
A bold rhyme and excellent vocabulary. Well done.
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Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015
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"in the play of a lonely
Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015
"in the play of a lonely child there is room for a whole world
of angels"
So, so true, Costmary.
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First love hurts vanessa.
Posted on Tue, 19 May 2015
First love hurts vanessa.
You captured that perfectly. Well done.
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'My father sighed, “Lillian,
Posted on Thu, 30 Apr 2015
'My father sighed, “Lillian, for fuck’s sake, stop playing with your food and take the dog out.” He poured himself another Jack Daniel’s'.
Best line of prose I've read this week.
I was a little nonplussed at the end when it...
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