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My eyes follow you into rain feeling dry earth becoming moist, growth echoing below meadow sweet pulsing daisies and buttercups to rise, flutter leaf...
The line:- Strange things are happening everyday. Taken from Alison Krauss and Robert Plant's record track Sister Rosetta Goes Before Us. https://www...
Vanessa wanting to have an argument in public on her birthday trip sounds mad. I think Spencer is right, he will be grumpy and argumentative if she wants him to be, but I don't think she's really thought that situation out properly, it could...
This is such an evocative write and brought back so many memories of my own. The imagination of Tom was similar to my own, and the fireworks in the back yard had me right there in my own back yard on November 5th.
Your poem was a powerful observation in words of how strong the wind can be, though unseen, its strength is carried in your great rhythm and rhyme Rhiannon.
this part has everything in it, mystery, romance, magic. I like how the story is coming together and the varied cast of characters are slowly discovering the truth...of course with thanks to Willow.
Brilliant write Harry. I so
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2024
Brilliant write Harry. I so enjoyed this trip down memory lane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone (3)
Ha! Ha! I could just imagine
Posted on Thu, 26 Sep 2024
Ha! Ha!
I could just imagine this man Gordon Baker surrounded by all those...
Read full commentPosted in On the Wind
Vanessa wanting to have an
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Vanessa wanting to have an argument in public on her birthday trip sounds mad. I think Spencer is right, he will be grumpy and argumentative if she wants him to be, but I don't think she's really thought that situation out properly, it could...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 35
This is such an evocative
Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2024
This is such an evocative write and brought back so many memories of my own. The imagination of Tom was similar to my own, and the fireworks in the back yard had me right there in my own back yard on November 5th.
Wonderful write Harry...
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone (2)
Your poem was a powerful
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Your poem was a powerful observation in words of how strong the wind can be, though unseen, its strength is carried in your great rhythm and rhyme Rhiannon.
You got my attention from the first line.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Visible signs of the invisible
I love the comical side to
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
I love the comical side to this story Paul. The verbal wit and thoughts gave me a smile.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Unleashed
This part has everything in
Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2024
Hi Penny,
this part has everything in it, mystery, romance, magic. I like how the story is coming together and the varied cast of characters are slowly discovering the truth...of course with thanks to Willow.
Still reading and...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 18
Very much enjoyed your story
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
Very much enjoyed your story Harry. You capture the imagination of the the little boy perfectly.
I like the setting too, reminds me of the 1960s.
Jenny,
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone (1)
Oh! Phil, you're keeping the
Posted on Fri, 20 Sep 2024
Oh! Phil, you're keeping the suspense going so well. I wonder! How Josiah and Archibald are doing.
This is another enthralling part to your story that I so enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bring Him Home (Dead Reckoning series - Part 27)
I'm so glad to see this well
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
I'm so glad to see this well explained writing got story of the week. Let's hope it's read by many.
Big congrats from me.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Where Are We Now? Ted Kaczynski and Technological Society
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