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I was close to embracing spring, its purity fresh faced like a maiden; nature's pink blossom radiating on her blushing, smiling cheeks, while showers...
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What a perfect walk you had
Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024
What a perfect walk you had Rhiannon. Moments like this have to be captured, and you did such a fine job of taking the reader there in your poem, which I very much loved.
This is such a brilliant poem Rhiannon, it reminds me of the many disappointments I've had at growing carrots. They can appear to look so healthy and enticing to pull up, but what comes out is just a stubby short carrot, not at all like the...
Great story for the I P Jane. I love Blodwyn's poem, it evoked folklore and timely care the skilled gardener puts forward to growing a submission in a competition.
Your recollections took me right back to the 50s & 60s and feeling privileged to have been a child then, I think we had the benefit of so much freedom in every respect, and found joy in the simple things.
Oooh! Archibald gets so confused and poor Josiah is so tolerant, I can feel his frustration building, but luckily Josiah manages to control his feelings.
I'll bet Archibald's already rushing back to that cupboard to relay what he's...
I wonder how Vanessa will react to that last comment about Spencer being a slave.
It's funny how our taste buds change as we get older. I used to grow chillies and put them with so many different foods, but now can't stand anything that's...
you know I never thought about Chere's record when I wrote those words. Although I get your point, there's no way I would take to a ship's deck with all those American sailors oggling me. She was lucky enough to have the looks...
What a perfect walk you had
Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024
What a perfect walk you had Rhiannon. Moments like this have to be captured, and you did such a fine job of taking the reader there in your poem, which I very much loved.
The photos do you proud too. Such beauty.
Thank you for...
Read full commentPosted in East from Cwm-yr-Eglwys
Hi Paul,
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024
Hi Paul,
always glad to see a new story from you, and It didn't disappoint. I'm now wondering how ominous the rest of this man's journey is going to be.
Great title and some mind blowing descriptions of his surroundings and the...
Read full commentPosted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)
Hi Penny,
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
Hi Penny,
just discovered the extra part. What a great idea to begin a new story. Look forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Book of All Answers"
This is such a brilliant poem
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
This is such a brilliant poem Rhiannon, it reminds me of the many disappointments I've had at growing carrots. They can appear to look so healthy and enticing to pull up, but what comes out is just a stubby short carrot, not at all like the...
Read full commentPosted in The tentative gardener
It's great to read a new
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024
It's great to read a new story from you Penny. Intrigued to know where the story takes the reader and what the book has to say.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Book of All Answers"
Great story for the I P Jane.
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2024
Great story for the I P Jane. I love Blodwyn's poem, it evoked folklore and timely care the skilled gardener puts forward to growing a submission in a competition.
Very well thought out and a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blodwyn's Hair
Your recollections took me
Posted on Sun, 19 May 2024
Your recollections took me right back to the 50s & 60s and feeling privileged to have been a child then, I think we had the benefit of so much freedom in every respect, and found joy in the simple things.
Though I never had any...
Read full commentPosted in This Sort of Thing - The Childhood Stage
Oooh! Archibald gets so
Posted on Fri, 17 May 2024
Oooh! Archibald gets so confused and poor Josiah is so tolerant, I can feel his frustration building, but luckily Josiah manages to control his feelings.
I'll bet Archibald's already rushing back to that cupboard to relay what he's...
Read full commentPosted in Standing in the Shadows of Love (Dead Reckoning series - Part 9)
I wonder how Vanessa will
Posted on Fri, 17 May 2024
I wonder how Vanessa will react to that last comment about Spencer being a slave.
It's funny how our taste buds change as we get older. I used to grow chillies and put them with so many different foods, but now can't stand anything that's...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you..Part 26
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024
Hi Turlough,
you know I never thought about Chere's record when I wrote those words. Although I get your point, there's no way I would take to a ship's deck with all those American sailors oggling me. She was lucky enough to have the looks...
Read full commentPosted in Waterfall
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