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I remember one hot summer in distant past...making believe while lying on dry matted grass, beneath a sky that was so vast, feeling that my soul was...
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Brilliant Jane. I felt like I
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Brilliant Jane. I felt like I was there and could see the whole scene in my mind. Poor Vanessa can't really relax with so much anxiety about Spencer and how he's perceived, I hope having a drink helps her.
Such a striking poem Turlough. Oh! For those simple days of going fishing with just a net on a summers day as a child and exploring the day away...you just can't beat those memories.
Remembering many days at Kingsweston pond fishing for...
I like how you register the little things that probably others don't even acknowledge. Stopping to really look and listen to every sound around you is well presented in this wonderful poem Paul.
that sounds so weird and like you said very dangerous. I've never seen anything like that on the roads, hope it doesn't catch on and become a new craze.
Brilliant Jane. I felt like I
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Brilliant Jane. I felt like I was there and could see the whole scene in my mind. Poor Vanessa can't really relax with so much anxiety about Spencer and how he's perceived, I hope having a drink helps her.
This story is really going...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 30
Such a striking poem Turlough
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Such a striking poem Turlough. Oh! For those simple days of going fishing with just a net on a summers day as a child and exploring the day away...you just can't beat those memories.
Remembering many days at Kingsweston pond fishing for...
Read full commentPosted in Tang Hall Beck
Oh! Dear, poor Archie has
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
Oh! Dear, poor Archie has really been thrown in at the deep end without a life jacket. I hope he will be okay. I don't trust Precious for one minute.
Looking forward to finding out.
Keep going Phil.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in My Girl and Me (Dead Reckoning series - Part 18)
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
Hi Turlough,
you have a sharp eye for threading words together to crate an impressive memoir of Eric's experience with Iceland.
I wonder if Eric would have eaten those fish fingers if he'd known where his wife got them from!
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Read full commentPosted in Eric’s War
I like how you register the
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
I like how you register the little things that probably others don't even acknowledge. Stopping to really look and listen to every sound around you is well presented in this wonderful poem Paul.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Rain at the Forest Cafe
Engaging and inventive as
Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024
Engaging and inventive as always Jane, with all the conflicting points of view.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 29
An irresistible read as
Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024
An irresistible read as always Phil.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Words (Dead Reckoning series - Part 17)
I thought your message was
Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024
I thought your message was most deep and meaningful, it makes you realize how lucky we are to be here, and to be able to leave our mark as you said.
It certainly resonated with how I feel.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Life
Hi Maxine,
Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024
Hi Maxine,
that sounds so weird and like you said very dangerous. I've never seen anything like that on the roads, hope it doesn't catch on and become a new craze.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ok, Now I Have Seen It All!!!!!!!
That last stanza really
Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024
That last stanza really brings home the meaning of your poem. Such s sad sequence of events leading to the downfall of the poor Natter Jack.
I had never heard of this folk lore tale before, so it was good to learn something new.
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