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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | The Law of Falling Bodies | onemorething | 5 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Village 5 | Kilb50 | 4 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Lockclown | celticman | 4 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Taking my liberty | Parson Thru | 8 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Craven's Got the Glums - A Repost with Audio | hudsonmoon | 6 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Mole | celticman | 12 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Hazy Days | skinner_jennifer | 14 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | The Stranger In The Pub | jolono | 18 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | I Tell Myself This When I Am Afraid | onemorething | 14 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Walking Away | onemorething | 8 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Jesenice | NeilJLRoberts | 2 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | I Fall In Love With A Plague Doctor | Lille Dante | 6 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Deimos | onemorething | 31 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Sleep walking | celticman | 10 | 5 years 11 months ago |
| Story | Sleep Walking 2 | celticman | 8 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Listen | Amavisti | 14 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | shopping in Asda | celticman | 9 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | 46. Sugar, Sugar | Ewan | 6 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | The Pre - Wedding Chat | jolono | 16 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | The Monkey Plans. (An audio extract from Sven Goes to War) | drew_gummerson | 13 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Blog entry | Story and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point | insertponceyfre... | 1 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Salty meanderings | Parson Thru | 15 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | Barn Owls | onemorething | 6 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | REDEPLOYED | Miss Polly | 6 | 5 years 12 months ago |
| Story | 43. Be Stiff | Ewan | 4 | 5 years 12 months ago |
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Me and Mickie Proofs
I had an email from the publisher telling me the proofs for ‘Me and Mickie James’ are bac
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Wee
On the first page of ‘The Penguin Variations’ a character has a wee. He is trying to help save the world so he doesn’t flush the toilet. I saw this on a programme on tv.
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Cover Story
One of my favourite books, ‘Death and The Penguin’ I bought because I liked the cover.
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The Suitcase
University had cleared me out. I had debts towering over me like obelisks and only two pairs of underpants left. I wore them on alternate weekdays, inside-out at weekends.
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Intimacy
"But why me? I asked. I was sitting at the desk on the opposite side of The Captain. The Captain was a large corpulent man given to sudden bouts of anger. The other officers said it was best to butter him up, but I had always found him very fair, without having to slip into unfeigned sycophancy.
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Just my opinion, but that
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020
Just my opinion, but that looks loads better. And, in line three, call him FF, then it's clear who he is from the beginning. (That's right, isn't it?)
Read full commentPosted in Lose the ivory towers - a novel
I liked it. Although it's
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020
I liked it. Although it's confusing. I'd lose the asterisks, as I think it'd flow better without. And the first time I read it I assumed he was one of the bank robbers... maybe that's just me.
Coincidentally I read a Clemens Meyer...
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Yes it is. Great, isn't it?
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020
Yes it is. Great, isn't it?
Read full commentPosted in There Was The House and There Was The Sea (1)
Really great story. Thanks
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2020
Really great story. Thanks for sharing. Like an updated version of one of those stories you'd read in a magazine.
Read full commentPosted in The Opposite Effect (3)
Well written. Good twist in
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2020
Well written. Good twist in the middle there. Wasn't expecting that .
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Bit strange is perfect for me
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
Bit strange is perfect for me. And I like that your poems have a specific style - they are very you, your voice - good I think when you are putting a collection together.
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I love this one too. To
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
I love this one too. To describe a person as a mole is unusual but fits perfectly and then you carry it on through the whole poem. And what you say is true - if we burrow ourselves our reality does become distorted, and memories invade...
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Catullus for me was a 30(+)
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
Catullus for me was a 30(+) year flashback.... You did Latin at uni? I only went to O level. I don't think there was an option to go further.
Read full commentPosted in The Provinces of Sea Swallows
This reminded me of Catullus,
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
This reminded me of Catullus, a personal nature poem speaking to another. Loved it.
Drew
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The writing is great and it's
Posted on Mon, 20 Jan 2020
The writing is great and it's full of ideas. But you've got too many ideas for the story, that aren't about the story. I think, in my opinion, the 1st part prior to the detonation is too long - because it doesn't balance with this section. Which...
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